Lost You Forever: Yao and Liu Were Destined to Be

This is a long love story about Yao Liu. The main CP is Awakening Xiaoyao + Xiang Liu. The language of this article is natural and fluent, and the author has certain writing skills. Although it is a fanfic, the storyline has been derived from the original work, giving it creativity, new ideas, and ups and downs. The core of the characters is consistent with the original work. The logic is complete and self-consistent. This is the only one among the one or two hundred Xiang Liu novels I have read in which Xiao Yao actually became the Queen Mother. The rest of the article may have this original intention, but it has not been realized. It is a very novel idea and plot. The pull between Yao Liu and Liu Liu is written in a touching and pathos way, and the story progresses very quickly without any delay, making it very exciting. This is already the author's third Yaoliu article. The Sun Rises at the beginning of the month and this book is very well written. I deeply felt the author's love for Xiang Liu. Xiaoyao in this article knows all the stories. The response to Sir Xiang Liu's affectionate, firm, brave and straightforward response is very impressive. There is the courage to make a desperate move, and there is also the deep love to move forward. The only slight flaw is that the writing at the beginning is a bit inferior, and the emotions that are collected are very abrupt, and there is not enough foreshadowing and details. Everything else is basically well written. Overall, this is an excellent Sauvignon Blanc fanfic. It is worth reading carefully and is recommended to everyone.

This idea is very good! Looking forward to the follow-up story of the strong and sober Xiaoyao and the mouthed Xiangliu!

It took me two days to read this Yaoliu novel, and the overall feeling is good. I have basically read all the Yaoliu novels on Tomato from the Chinese New Year to now. This one is quite attractive, but there are two points that I can't accept. One is the emotional line between Shanshou and Wuxue. Xiaoyao who Shanshou liked first ended up becoming Xiaoyao's son-in-law [face covering], although they don't care about seniority issues. But as a reader, I still feel a little uncomfortable. Another thing is that the ending is like a time-travel drama, directly changed into the modern era. I still hope that they can be happy in the world of Xiang Liu and Xiao Yao. This ending directly made me laugh. I shed a lot of tears while reading the book. With a modern ending, I suddenly felt that this is not the story of Xiang Liu and Xiao Yao. Maybe I am more attached to Yao Liu.

I think this is the best of the three Yaoliu works written by the author. There are many fanfics, but few are memorable. The ideas and concepts here are brilliant (it has nothing to do with time travel/reincarnation). The whole story has an emotional tone of sadness, which undoubtedly enhances the tension of the rivalry scenes. The Yaoliu Wen I took is first of all a double strength, not in the narrow sense of spiritual power, but in a strong character. In addition, in addition to the emotional line, there is a full story line, and the protagonist has other things to do besides falling in love. The emotional line runs through the entire text, without fragmentation or formatting, not in terms of length but in quality. The author has taken care of both here.

Already read them all! The author of this book is great! Yaoliu is so sweet! Xiaoyao finally became the Queen Mother! And protect Xiang Liu's safety! Very vivid! No more opposing sides on the battlefield! Their children are in droves! Live happily together! Carefree! Live a normal life! Perfection!

The writing is very good. The plot is compact and not procrastinating. The characters have great contrast in personality and are not the same cookie-cutter descriptions as before. It's great, great, come on, please update more soon.

Yao Liuwen, who enters with his eyes closed, is the love of every life. Li Jiu Yao and Xiling Jiu Yao are the same soul. After all, Xiaoyao and Xiangliu spent three to four hundred years of love together in the wilderness, and they agreed to be husband and wife for the rest of their lives. Regarding Xiaoyao's recognition. Li Jiuyao and Xiling Jiuyao have the same soul. After the memories of the two merged, she couldn't tell which one she belonged to. Belonging to Wen Xiaoliu had a modern dream. About Yao Liu's ending. In the Great Wilderness, Xiaoyao left six blood relatives for Xiangliu. Xiangliu nursed the children while taking care of his wife who was in a vegetative state. He lived his whole life as a widow as if he was resentful of his husband (what a funny description). The second modern life is sweet and funny. After reading it, I discovered that whether Xiao Yao wakes up or not, Liu in the wilderness and the reincarnated Liu always have a resentful husband. In the end, the reincarnated Liu with memories is more resentful. Generally speaking, there are no flaws in this article, and the plot development is logical, but the ancient bloodshed is not absent. The bloody plot is in the later stage and is used to promote the development of the story and does not cause substantial harm to Yaoliu (I am an exception, it is mental trauma)

This is the last one! What a pity [crying] The writing in big letters is so beautiful. I will check in on time before going to school tomorrow morning. The ending of Yao Liu gave me a headache. The writing in big letters is sad and sweet, the heartbeat is pounding, and the plot is full of ups and downs. I highly recommend [Blow Kiss] [Blow Kiss]

The writing is very good, but in the end, Xiaoyao knew that her soul was unstable, but she still wanted to get pregnant and gave birth to four children. It felt contrived. Personally, I felt that it was a bit stiff to promote the plot, but it was still very interesting. Cheers, author [salute]

Good, good, good