Aotu World: I Really Don’t Have Yuanli

If you say this is not good-looking, I will definitely be the first to object, but from the perspective of the protagonist, this book should have a particularly big knife. When the protagonist reveals his life experience, I feel that there is a certain chance that he will die, but it still depends on how the author writes it. If it were me, before this The paragraph uses the full text of Zongqi, which has already paved the way for me to write the knife later. Then I may overdo it in the middle and write the knife directly at the end. This will have a greater visual impact and easily arouse the reader's interest. If the author cannot write, it will probably be a sweet article in the end. I think the author is a novice, so I suggest that the author write a story, because you have already built the front part, and you can write sweet stories with as many extra chapters as possible, because a small number of people like to watch the extra chapters, but many people prefer the main plot, and some people like to skip the extra chapters directly, then read the back part, and then come back to read it. Then the author can follow this nature and write the extra chapter once and finish it directly. If there are many extra chapters, Write a few words and cover some content. You can divide the side stories into many, so you can give yourself more time to think about the main story. Write sweet stories for the side stories, and sad stories for the main story. When everyone has finished watching the side stories, and then watch the main story, you will find that everyone cried even harder. There should be a strong contrast between the side story and the main story. Everyone pays attention to him in the spin story, and everyone is wary or hostile to him in the main story. You can write a spin story On campus, you can also create your own world. You can put a knife at the end of the episode. The protagonist must go home, right? Then bury a knife on the protagonist's way home, and write that they are walking home with the protagonist. When the protagonist comes back to his senses, he realizes that it is his own hallucination. It is best to write more interactions in the front to fit the character's personality, such as Lei Shi An Mi Xiu or The interaction between Abby and Amy and their quarrels are easier to write because they will interact on campus or in a self-built house, and there will be no OOC when writing it. Don't let too many people die in the main plot, just save a few, so the author must not stop. You see, I have paved the way for you in the future. If you don't write a knife later, you will not be sorry for my nearly 600-word comment.

OK, I will just write a 2026 Thunder Book Review. I particularly like the character of Mia! This is one of the few convex novels that I can read. The author's writing style is very good. The overall reading is very comfortable, and the relationship between the characters is also very well controlled. The whole setting of this book feels very novel and great to me. I don't think the characters are OOC. I like this book. It's a pity that it's not updated anymore. I'm especially looking forward to the later content TvT. Infatuated readers, please wait for another life.

It's nice to read. I have a picky taste, but this book is really not very OOC. For example, in the part about Gray, other fans may make Gray soft-hearted, and he won't feel like a cool guy. The part about the Thunder Lion Pirates is easy to restore, but other fans may just go straight to it. Getting on the line with Lei Shi, like the exchange with Zi Tang Huan in the second season of the original plot, I think Lei Shi should have equal strength when making a deal, and if there is no equivalence, there should also be favors (similar to Jin's). This book is well written, and it would be great to let Palos and Pelli go! ! Give the author motivation to keep writing (❁´`❁)

The setting of the protagonist is really strange, and the storyline is also novel. What I like most is that it is not a brainless strongman, but has Luo Ji. It is very comfortable to watch. I look forward to the author's wonderful follow-up [Blow kiss] [Please update]

It's a very good book. The main character has a normal IQ and there is no retarded plot. The author must not give up. The data of this book is also good. You can see that there are more than 200 update reminders. It is already very good. Don't give up. Come on, this book will definitely become popular. So many people are reading it now at only Chapter 26. As long as you keep updating, the data will get better and better [Sending Hearts][Sending Hearts][Sending Hearts]

The story in this book is very fresh and I have never seen it in any other novel.

The narrative rhythm is quite beautiful. It has obviously broken away from the shackles of the linear narrative of most online novels, and it is not new to the genre yet. The interweaving of plots often has surprising points. At first glance, the wording may seem ordinary, but the exquisite structure becomes the highlight, making the wording irrelevant. This brilliant way is actually more difficult and requires more skill than the rhetorical way. Of course, if it is well written, it will better highlight the author's level. Personally, this book is excellent.

Super pretty! Why did the author run away? Why! Here comes another good book called Grave Sweeping, why is it so short!

It's really good to watch. I hope that the author will be able to publish a book about Ougaku Gakuen in the future.

I really like Mia. Mia's character design is very good. I'm not very good at commenting, but I really like this book.