Aotu World: Just Kidding, I, Xi Yao, Am Incredibly Powerful

I think the author can divide it into more natural paragraphs, such as a sentence, a natural paragraph or when he comes out to do something. A natural paragraph will look much more comfortable like this, otherwise it will look boring if it has many words. For example, the dialogue between the protagonist and other people can be written separately. For example, if you say something in the first sentence, start the second sentence with a natural paragraph. This will look very comfortable. A suggestion, I hope the author sees that many novel authors write like this, and it seems a lot more comfortable, without having to carefully read too many words in a row. It seems difficult to find the words when writing natural paragraphs without separation. Suddenly, when you are distracted, you don't know where you are looking? (I really hope the author can see my suggestion)

Still very beautiful

The content of this book is actually quite good, I recommend it to the author. Swap the contents of Volume 1 and Volume 2.

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