Love: A Beautiful Girl Contemplating Suicide on the Rooftop?

Hee hee, of course I got full marks in my own evaluation.

Are you sure Treasure Book is not popular? I'm afraid that the poster wrote and then stopped writing. If this is written down, the idea of ​​​​really making a big deal is very good.

The heroine is based on Ochiai Fan Yan, the hero is changed from the teacher in the manga to a classmate, and the background is changed from Japanese comics to the city, which is innovative, but the rhythm of the dialogue between the two people in the front is a bit slow. The scene is fixed, the time is slow, and there are only two characters on the stage, so dialogue becomes the main part. If you can't have interesting dialogue similar to the "Monogatari Series", then you should clarify the main line of the story (build a consensus with readers), otherwise the story will be unattractive from an original point of view, and readers who can't match the frequency will often leave here.

Come on, let me comment on this book. The main plot is the redemption story of the protagonist group, who constantly explores their true side, and learns to see and accept it. The story style is on par with Su Qing's. You can read it slowly. There are counter-routines, laughs, but there are also uncomfortable points (some settings). I haven't seen any tears yet. The truths told in the novel are indeed somewhat profound. (But what I said is just that. Very revealing) For example, it talks about what love is, the various forms of love... In the later stage, I don't know how the male protagonist plans to deal with the female protagonists. It seems that they can only pester the male protagonist. In fact, it is good to have a harem with just a few female protagonists. It depends on how the ending is handled. Just don't make it a pseudo-ending (only redemption, the ending is open-ended). It is very annoying. In short, the author's writing is good and worth pursuing, come on!

A gal-like rooftop unfolds (vision noe), a deskmate with a dark heart, the unknown past of the male protagonist, a childhood sweetheart and a tsundere young lady (the elements are full, the author must have played with many gals), it still has a flavor, I hope to be on the airwaves

This book is the most beautiful one I have found in a while. It is a treasure. Ahhhhhhh, not enough, not enough at all, it's so beautiful

Life is hard and difficult. This book is a bit too tragic for me. There is a feeling of resonance in many places. Because I have some common experiences with the male protagonist, it is easy to relate to it. The more you relate to it, the more you can feel the heavy feeling. Until I read the latest chapter, most of the feelings this book gave me was extremely depressing. The writing is still very good, although some places are a bit abstract. I hope it will be a little better later. This is one of the few books that did not make me feel sad but regretted that it was depressing 🤦

I sincerely hope that the author can persevere and give this work, no, it is an epic to me, a perfect ending. This is the only work besides "My 26-year-old Female Tenant" that has touched my heart and written many stories that I yearn for. Some people say psychological dialogue There are too many, but for me, we are not the protagonist, and we do not have unwavering determination. When faced with a decision, we will have uncontrollable and irregular thoughts in our hearts. For the younger style, it is this story that is better than reality, and more realistic than fairy tales, that can make us feel more regretful. You've already said it, this is a work that commemorates your youth, so there's no need to care about other people's opinions. Finally, no matter how this work ends, I support you. It is no longer just a work in my heart.

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Yes, it's a treasure. I hope it won't be like Su Cheng's book, which has more than 2 million words and is still being read (face covering), just like stock trading. Finally, let's change the cover Congratulations to the author fire