Honkai: Star Rail: The Preservation’s Wrong Turn

I was about to review the YaYa book, but I found out that I wrote a new one [crying] or the heroine Silver Wolf and Duck [crying] [crying] [crying] I absolutely support it [please update]

The products produced by Lao Luo must be high-quality, just watch it and it's over

As long as this book becomes popular, I will be a long-time fan.

It's not bad, but the original characters in it are not very consistent with the original work. It's just a cover story. The writing is still good. The author's setting here should be: the weakness of the protector is exactly the person he wants to protect. It's a bit like a contract. If the person to whom the contract is harmed, the power of the guardian will be lost. It should be like this. Looking at the beginning, the protagonist was hit by Silver Wolf's car (the author also secretly pointed out in the article that the reason for being hit was because the protagonist was unprepared for the attack from Silver Wolf), and was injured by Silver Wolf's bombing of the honeycomb. This should be the reason. Those who said that the combat power was broken probably didn't pay attention to this. There is also the chapter where he confesses his love to Kafka. From the beginning when the protagonist prepares to meet the silver wolf, I feel that the twist is a bit too fast. I originally prepared 999 roses, but in an instant the enemies behind appeared. Then the silver wolf unknowingly controlled the fleet and pulse-blasted the protagonist. The twist was a bit too fast, which made me as a reader feel a little uncomfortable. It was only after reading that chapter that I understood the development of the story. But to be honest, I still feel that this kind of knife is not very good. It can be clearly stated that it must be hidden from Silver Wolf, which leads to a series of more abusive plots. But the author's quality is still good, but the development of the whole story made me feel a little unnecessary. (But it seems that if it doesn't develop like this, I can't think of anything to write about [face covering] The protagonist is already a diamond, and there is no need to write about getting stronger and fighting monsters. Apart from getting stronger, the only things I can write about are daily life or sadistic things.) But no matter what, the author should work hard, I still hope to write better and better [Love]

Lao Luo's emotional line is as delicate as ever, narrating the psychological changes and relationship progress of the characters, laughing without losing sadness, and having a realistic idealistic romance, which is gripping and fascinating. The data for Lao Luo's books will not be very good at the beginning. People who like it will like it very much, and people who hate it will really not be able to stand it. I hope the author will not be affected by the bad reviews and can persist as always. We will all support you.

I feel that "Dance of Sinners" has exhausted Lao Luo's talent in writing female leads. Ps. Is that pillow supposed to be a eunuch? Pps. I already feel Lao Luo's obsession with Sky Rita and Silver Wolf.

I have read the previous books by Lao Luo. The quality is very good, so I will give this book 5 stars.

That iron-breaking book was sealed, and I didn't even read it.

Hee hee hee hee, Lao Luo hehe hehe hehe hehe...[Adoration][Admiration][Admiration]

Since it is Lao Luo's new book, let me support it with five stars first, and then there is the character issue, Kafka and Silver Wolf are all broken (don't take me to read it), and the warm and healing introduction of your introduction... It is recommended to bring your own pacemaker when reading. In the end, Lao Luo's writing is still as good as ever (Lao Deng, a few novels)