Acheron's Journey Through the City

Dang Dang! Is it okay for me to give my own book a five-star review? [Laughing evilly] (I can't write novels under this account, so I opened a small account)

It's a very good book. It's very beautiful. The protagonist has already become the shape of hell (sad), and the urban background is quite clear. At least I, a cloud player, can understand it. I'm really looking forward to what the author will write in the future. Good reviews.

It's super good-looking. I'm the only author who feels that Huang Quan's power and behavior are not obtrusive at all. The author will update it soon.

Mijia actress shows off her strength () It's a very good novel, but the author's speed of updating it every ten days is a bit laughable.

The characters are pretty solid so far, and the seriousness and humor are well interspersed. The only drawback is that the author seems to have not saved the manuscript.

Well, it feels good. Although I haven't played either game, I have learned about them both. Shuangchu ecstasy [laughing evilly] just don't understand why they both like to be transformed by Huang Quan's memory in the end. In this case, what is the use of the original time traveler? Doesn't it feel like it makes much sense, or is it easier to find reasons to travel this way? If possible, I hope the author can explain that I don't understand this aspect very well. [Facepalm] But overall it's okay. I hope the author will continue to work hard and make persistent efforts [you taste it carefully]

The plot is very good, but there are many problems with the setting details, such as the cooperation between R and L, T company products (TT2 is invested by L), etc. But generally good

A very good novel that made my phone spin. Also, please update soon! ! ! ! [Cry][cry][cry]

Ingredients like mine. The complicated monthly expression is really beautiful. The writing is too slow and not enough to read. How long has it been? Update soon. I'm almost dying of old age from waiting.

Yes, it's really better than other products of the same type. It looks good and not too bad. However, I would like to raise a few minor questions and suggestions. First of all, your monthly setting is a bit weird🤨. Did electronic mobile phones appear so early? In my impression, it seems to be using The wired phone is coming, and, at present, the feeling of Huangquan is a little less, and there are some signs of OOC (of course, considering the readers' love and your setting is not the original Huangquan, the suggestions here can be selectively adopted) You Huangquan is a neutral unit in Tiezhong, and she recognizes it equally All "existences", even if the other side has killed countless lives and committed heinous crimes (he is talking about the Grand Duke), she does not care about justice, nor will she be happy that she is a strong person, nor will she think about overthrowing the system and changing the world. She just performs her duties, just like she helped the blood crime Like spirits, even in the main plot, she only helps the protagonist group to save the blood and evil spirits and return favors (she is willing to do her best). She doesn't care whether she cares or not. Maybe she is not such a person originally (after all... She is also Mei), but under the influence of nothingness, she will not care. (These are my thoughts, which may be quite subjective. They are based on watching the videos of Lao Ku and watching the plot myself. Please point out if they are wrong and let's have a friendly discussion.)