What Are You Talking About? Go Tell My E.G.O.

B Your work is a newcomer in the field of Yueji. The integration of cards and EGO is just right. However, the shortcoming is that the connection with the plot and the emotional change of the characters are too sudden. The male and female protagonists seem to switch personalities at the beginning and later. Even if it is to speed up the development of the plot, you should know how to proceed step by step. Based on the comprehensive evaluation, I give you a B rating.

Okay, it's very good. It's a very good monthly novel. The progress of the plot is not slow, but there is a female protagonist and the changes in the emotional line are a bit sudden. The part where the Mo family head is campaigning feels a bit abrupt and problematic. All other aspects are excellent. In short, please work hard, author! [Sending Hearts]

The description is good, the foreshadowing is there, and it doesn't seem too abrupt. There are no particularly big shortcomings, and there are no particularly good advantages. But after all, the material selection is biased, and the writing is very good. The author remembers not to interrupt updates, and support it with five stars.

Personally, I think it's okay. Among them, I feel that I can write repentance into Still Liberation. Repentance and Still Liberation can be roughly written in appearance, which is divided into a cross on the top of the head, and the upper rail of the hand emits a pale light. There are two types of attacks when the mouth is opened, one is melee and returns to the gate to cause a range, the other is to cause dizziness when attacking, and the other will cast a white light when it causes damage, causing a lot of mental damage.

The plot is very good, the writing is great, and the fans' feelings are taken into consideration. I just mentioned something about the new plot in the group, and I was asked to add it to several posts. I was so touched.

A+, very good monthly fanfic

Despite the abstract title of his book, the writing is pretty good. It is one of the better ones among the monthly account novels I have read. I recommend them.

I propose that the author should update ten times a day. Who is in favor and who is against [shy]

It's good to watch, but there's little foreshadowing in the plot. Most of the content feels like it was written just as it came to mind. Overall, I'm willing to give it an A. It can be regarded as a masterpiece among monthly articles.

Great book, looking forward to the follow-up