Harry Potter: A Poem of Rose Vows

It's very interesting and feminist-friendly, but the love break in the middle is really uncomfortable to watch. I don't understand why two people with such different views are attracted to each other. After all, Xiaolong has really hurt the heroine and her friends. Even if the heroine has intentions, it shouldn't be so easy. At that time, Xiaolong's ideas have not changed, but they just don't show it on the surface. Every time I see these descriptions, I feel very inconsistent. The heroine seems to have betrayed herself when she escaped from the Collins house. Other than that, everything is very good. The plot is also well written. The supporting characters, especially the female characters, are also well portrayed. The friendship line is very comfortable to watch.

In fact, I wanted to write about it halfway through, but after thinking about it, I decided to write this short review after reading the entire book including the extras. (Minor spoilers) About OOC: Compared with many extremely exaggerated and cheat-like fan fiction, the OOC part of this game is quite good, including the battle of life experience and changes. The trio of protagonists (including the Gryffindor faction): Those who love and like Gryffindor must be as described in the article. About cp Draco: How to say the sweetness of love? The plot can completely refer to the way Chu Yuxun treated the male protagonist many years ago, but Draco is completely a dog-licker (excluding the fact that the female protagonist has not left the family in the early stage). Personal feelings (although my feelings are not important, I hope it can be a reminder to friends who prefer Slytherin): The Malfoy family will gradually move into various states of grievance after the second grade. When I saw 70% of the movie, I almost felt so internally injured that I was about to give up the book. I couldn't see Draco's pride in coming from the Malfoy family. It was a complete process of transforming the male protagonist (and the male protagonist was also happy with it). Assuming that the personalities were swapped, it would be hard to imagine what would be said, because it is impossible to see a relationship in which both people are evenly matched. But some short clips are indeed quite touching, such as the two of them grabbing the Golden Snitch, and Xiaolong saying "You won Slytherin, and you also won my heart" were very well written! However, in this book, don't expect Xiao Long to be the "young master". Lucius is also completely distorted in the extra story. It gives me the impression that the Malfoy family did not cause any substantial harm to the heroine, right? Aren't all those injuries caused by the heroine's parents? How come she feels like the Malfoy family owes her... Anyway, I feel a little sorry for Draco. In the original book, he was just a miserable and struggling villain (he had to do a lot of work for Voldemort), but now falling in love seems to be an extra struggle. I have been evaluating it from a very objective perspective (if I were to evaluate it from the perspective of a Slytherin Draco fan, I would be furious).

Good-looking, I really like my little sister, woo woo, honest, beautiful and brave little badger My wife's description is great ~ it has a great atmosphere and feeling! Praise the wife! ! ! ! ! Everyone's images are three-dimensional and vivid, and everyone is good (๑> <๑) Each character has his own unique and sparkling personality. Everyone is unique, three-dimensional, real and vivid! Super awesome! Big praise

It is true that my wife was too frustrated, but because the writing was so good, she endured it until the end of the third chapter. The growth direction may be slow or slow, but the growth of the heroine in the more than 100 chapters I read is very vague. I feel that apart from gaining friendship at Hogwarts and being able to be herself, I feel no other changes in the heroine. Her character is also very strange. Sometimes she is out of touch, sometimes confused, sometimes assertive, and she feels that she cannot express her true aspirations. There is also a love line. To be honest, I feel that it expresses Draco's heart a little too much. The scenes and the heroine are half and half. But the heroine hasn't really fallen in love with Draco yet. Therefore, in long-term one-dimensional descriptions, I sometimes bring myself into Draco, which makes me feel uncomfortable. It has been going one way without any results. Even when I read the third chapter, I felt a little defensive. It has been so long, and the heroine has not even reached the level of a friend in her heart. So in this situation where the growth direction of the heroine is not obvious and the love line is not yet satisfying to me, I chose to put it in my collection and let it languish for a while. Let's take a look later. After all, there aren't many writing styles that can make me feel so comfortable.

The plot is very good, and the author is very good at comedy. I am really amused by the author and I laugh out loud from time to time [laughing and crying]. The heroine's parents are not good people, but the heroine has a brother who gives her all his love. The heroine works as Draco's follower for her brother. The heroine has been being healed by her brother and good friends from the trauma of her original family. She has never She has enough self to love herself. After her brother was taken away by Dumbledore, the heroine had no worries. Then Draco was miserable and started chasing his wife in the crematorium. She deserved it. Who told you to bully the heroine before? [Laughing] When Draco fought and snatched while other men who admired the heroine would only secretly fall in love with her, the heroine finally She fell in love with Draco. Draco's good days have come, but unfortunately Voldemort has been resurrected. The heroine firmly believes that she and Voldemort are enemies. Although she can't bear to leave Draco, she still proposes to separate from Draco. Draco's good days are over [laughing and crying] I won't say what happened after that, but the ending is, I recommend the female protagonist to read it [laughing] In fact, I think the torture of Draco is not harsh enough. Draco's good life in other authors' writings is called a carefree life. It is rare to see a story about Draco being tortured. I really want to see Draco being tortured severely [laughing] Unfortunately, I haven't found a story that meets my requirements so far.

The writing is very beautiful, and the little dragon is so cute before he gets his wits about him. Those who want to fall into the trap can rest assured, I hope you can do more [flying kisses] [flying kisses] [flying kisses]

My wife's writing is really good, but I personally don't like the heroine's character very much. It makes me feel really frustrated [I'm about to cry]

Miracle! Personally, I think this is a zero-ooc HP fanfic. The climax of the battle in the later stage really makes people want to pee when they read it. The correct way to open the group portrait, every character is very three-dimensional and cute! ! At the same time, I would like to thank the author for giving everyone a good ending. Cedric and Qiu had a lovely daughter, Xiaoduo did not die alone, the Weasley twins continued to do good things happily, Dumbledore secretly visited Austria while traveling around the world, Snape presided over the wedding of Ellie and Xiaolong and was about to get a child with the unrelated name but Snape [Eat Melon] Love and courage can overcome all difficulties! To quote a short paragraph: Alicia didn't expect that her words could trigger so many people's reactions. She cleared her throat and continued: "But, from a certain day, I discovered your change, and gradually fell in love with you——" Alicia ignored Draco's "tell me" look and squeezed his hand, "Thank you for giving me the humility of an arrogant person, the generosity of a selfish person, and the frankness and restraint of a reckless person." "I swear that I will cherish this rare transformation until the last second of my life." "I love you, Draco."

It is indeed a slow-burning type, and it is not a cool article. The heroine gradually grows from timid to sincere, brave and reliable, and the character creation is very successful. The beginning will filter out a large number of people, leaving only readers who like this style. It writes a HP fanfic from the perspective of Hufflepuff, and enriches the protagonist's own plot. It does not just focus on the main line, but has a very strong flavor of Hogwarts and authentic campus life. The writing style is very humorous and funny. I kept laughing (it never stopped). I love British bad jokes. It's not nonsense and humorous, but a joyful daily life, which is very suitable for Hufflepuff! The other characters are also well written. Draco's transformation from a brat to a real Malfoy (of course I also like the sticky part with the heroine); Cedric, a sincere and cheerful gentleman; Zhang Qiu, the courage and will of women, and the friendship between girls... And many, many more! When I judge how good a HP fanfic is, first of all, it depends on how the author writes about Snape. If he is still venomous, awkward, and tooth-itching but still makes people laugh out loud because of the ironic metaphors, then this article is 90% successful in restoring the character. Obviously, the author has great skills hhhh What I like even more is that the plots between girls have more female friendships and progress, and describe more beautiful scenes of mutual support and helping to solve problems. Not all conflicts between female characters have to be intensified through female competition and then defeat the other party. Every female character is an independent individual. Even female characters like Pansy, who are often portrayed as victims of pure-blood marriages, have their own thoughts and paths. This is my favorite thing. Every character is alive. It is a treasure for me to see this book in 🍅. I wish the rating will reach 9.5 Soon, and I wish the author will get better and better.

The character of the heroine is different from most books. Some people say it's cowardly, but I think it's okay. I originally thought that the heroine would be perfect with everyone except Draco, but then I saw that Draco and the heroine really hit each other hard. It's super sweet. Although it's a bit OOC, it really doesn't stop this book from being super good. Please update it soon!