The Outcast: As the Leader of the Whole Nature School, I Outclass the Celestial Master

It's not a fault. Although his previous books have higher scores, I feel that the quality is not as good as this one. The author has really read Under One Person and has not ruined the character. The score is low because this book just came out. I don't like the heroine myself. There is no ambiguity or edge in this book. It is updated steadily three times a day, and each chapter is about 2,000 words. , The writing is really good, but the author once said that he didn't find a girlfriend because he was worried: "You can't have any weaknesses in your body." I am still more afraid of finding a girl to have an affair with after I become invincible. Anyway, I hope the author writes better and better [rolls eyes]

I have read Chapter 50 so far. To be honest, I still have a good impression of this book. Except that the author's writing style needs polishing, the protagonist does not breed horses, does not recruit girls randomly, and will not change at will. The fate of the characters in the play does not involve killing. I feel that this is very good. As long as the follow-up is not too censorship and does not cause trouble, it can also be said to be a masterpiece of a fan, and the author has also given a lot of praise. Very detailed illustrations, so that people who have never read Under One Person can enjoy this fan novel happily. Many people mentioned the poisonous point in Chapter 22 in the book review. To be honest, my mentality changed a little when I saw that. Apparently the author also realized that everyone was unhappy when they saw the reward being recycled, so he did not mention that point again. The author's idea was probably that he did not want the protagonist to come. The bug stuck, and I was blamed for washing my hair. Repeatedly getting rewards, but the description method is a bit unsatisfactory, but even so, I feel that such flaws cannot cover up this book. I feel that the protagonist is completely integrated into the role of this book, not as abrupt as Si Hao. It is like the protagonist explaining something about the warlock to Zhang Chulan. There should be the author's own part in it. Some understandings, I feel pretty good, overall evaluation, some details are not handled well, but it cannot cover up some of the points where this book shines. At least it can compare with other fan fiction. Reading it feels like a cup of tea, you can slowly taste it, you can skip it after reading 22 chapters of the original work by one person, and it does not affect the overall reading experience. The above only represents my personal opinion. Finally, I hope the author can work hard!

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Very good, so far so good. According to the character of the protagonist, I suggest that you stay single and not have a heroine in the future. Without a heroine, there will be no worries, and the protagonist can take the blame so shamelessly. This is the plot I want to watch. To be honest, 3 chapters in one day is a lot compared to other authors, but it is still not enough! !

Come on, just update more. I will recommend this book to my friends. It is so good that it cannot be buried. It is uncomfortable to be like those stallions in the harem. This book must be highly recommended [like] [like] [like] [send heart] [send heart] [send heart]

How should I put it? Looking at it now, the only bad thing is the part where the protagonist fights against the old master. The old master is defeated too quickly, or it is very strange, or the author did not write it well. Other than that, I feel that the writing is very good.

Love to watch, like, like, like, like

The story is written fluently and the rhythm is well-timed. It feels like being under one person, and the development is not boring. The plot is very thoughtful, much better than the cookie-cutter ones. There is basically no OOC, it is very comfortable to watch, and the characters have their own thoughts. A rare masterpiece worth seeing. The disadvantage is that it is too short. Seeing that many people are complaining about the retroactive rewards in Chapter 22, I think it is unreasonable. In fact, it is just a small advancement to the plot, and it does not say anything about directly reducing the combat power. It is concluded that it will not work before looking at the back. It can only be said that people are different. The taste of one person is so right. Isn't it a good taste when looking at the same person? It can be seen that the author understands one person very well. I'm so stupid, I'm done with it now

It's a good one-person fanfic, with a fun-loving protagonist.

I just like this feeling of being invincible. When I watch Naruto, I feel like I am Sasuke. When I watch this, I feel like I am Qin Shou [Admiration]. Now I am really living more and more, but I like to read Shuangwen [making faces]