
You Were Told to Write About Time, So You Wrote Steins;Gate?
让你写时间,你写命运石之门?
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- Completed
- Length
- 455k Words
- Genre
- Urban
- Subgenre
- Urban High-Concept
- Updated
- 1y ago
- Source
- Fanqie
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New Author, New Book. You Post It, I’ll Comment!
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I want to read books like "Myriad Transmigrations: After Turning Into a Phone, I Enjoyed Every Perk". Support new writers and let’s keep each other going. This similar title is actually my own book, so if you can, please give it five stars too ≥﹏≤
Any Sky Screen Stories That Don't Focus on History?
Why are all the sky screen stories these days about history? Are there any sky screen stories about other topics? Please recommend some, everyone!
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Looking for Reasonable Reaction-Fic Novels Without Original Characters
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Screenwriting Competition Series
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Screenwriting Contest Series, with an Unconventional Protagonist!
Novels in the Screenwriter Competition series, with protagonists who don't follow the usual path!
Any Good Stories About Transmigrating into an AI-Animated Creation Contest?
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Come on, you are the first to write about Stone Gate in the writing competition 😢 🥺
It looks like there aren't many people, but actually everyone who has seen Steins; Gate is here 🤦
It's still very good. The evaluation of Steins; Gate is relatively true. I just don't know if the author can add plots that are not in the anime, such as the part about the blackened animals (it is clearly stated in the movie that there is indeed one), the personal story of Yugo Tennoji (Mr. Brown), and Shoichi Makiyori (Beni Makise) of the α world line. Risu's father is also the reason why Makise Kurisu has different attitudes toward time machines in the two world lines), etc. After all, just watching the same plot as the anime is still a bit boring. I hope the author can add some so that readers who don't know can also understand the sad stories behind them (the working warriors are really awesome). Come on, author!
Anyone who plays with Stone Gate is not a bad person. After Stone Gate is over, we can write about our game life. If some people urge us to use the Star Cup competition in the second season to teach them a lesson. The Monogatari series is also okay, but the Monogatari series is more abstract, has a lot of dialogue, and is not easy to write. Then let's add a new Holy Grail War, three key words: time, game, and wish.
Although the pace is a bit slow, the plot of the anime is quite well grasped. However, it is more like dismantling the anime with text descriptions, and there is almost no audience reaction and follow-up in the plot. Those who have watched the anime may feel bored after watching it, and those who have not watched it may abandon it because the narrative pace is slow and the beginning is not refreshing enough (of course, this is related to the early rhythm of the Steins; Stone anime itself, which can't be helped) The writing is actually good, and the description of the plot is also very good. It is still a good article.
I must give five stars when writing about Stone Gate, but I hope the author will pay attention to the problem that the narrative in front of Stone Gate is too long. After all, some people, including me, watch Stone Gate basically for the next 12 episodes (this is purely a personal opinion, if there is anything wrong or disagree, then you are right, don't scold me 😢)
It's been a while since I've written a book review because it's been a while since I've finished reading this book. In the case of hard persimmons, most writers will stop updating, and then I can only find books to read. But, today - yesterday afternoon to be precise, I read this book. By coincidence, I wanted to finish Steins; Gate, but I didn't want to spend seven or eight hours on it because I didn't have the patience. But the novel made up for this very well, allowing me to read it in fragments, so I stayed up until two o'clock to write this book review. After I finished reading it, I saw the author's final remarks, so I suddenly felt inspired. Okay, let's end the digression and return to the essence of the book. The author's rhythm is actually very well controlled. Although the author himself complained about others saying that his rhythm was slow, people who have never watched the anime or played the original work may not know that the rhythm of Stone Gate is like this. In other words, most of the pacing of Shao Nao Fan is very slow, which is good enough. The judges in the competition did try to push the protagonist, but he was conquered in the end. I like this very much. The author writes a person with a brain, not a puppet who acts to serve the plot. But there is still a shortcoming here. The scene jumps in the early animation were not smooth enough. I almost got confused at first, and it was only after I turned back to understand that a certain scene jumped. But later on, the author's writing style improved and this point was corrected, so you can pay attention to scene jumps when watching it in the early stages, which will be helpful. Okay, because it's too long, I won't say more. Conclusion: A rare good book, worth reading. FLCLF. Left on September 10, 26
I revisited Steins; Gate again, and the details were restored, row after row. The author's writing style is also good. After so many years, I can still see the Stone of Destiny in Tomato in the form of a novel, which is also infinitely emotional. The whole article is coherent and is a good masterpiece. The text has the charm of words and the animation has the advantages of animation. It is suitable for reading during the second time.
The writing is quite good. Although most of it is based on the content of the drama, the plot writing is also good. It is understandable that it is difficult to give up the data. But the author, can you please tell me what the other accounts are called and what you have written before? It feels good. Let's go and see it. This number is one of two books that obviously gave up early and did not write seriously.
Tomato is a rare Stone Gate work. Although it is a movie, it is surprisingly good. This year 2025 happens to be the time when the brooch disappears from the record. I am very grateful to the author for allowing me to review Stone Gate again in this special year. It reminds me of the shock of watching Stone Gate at that time, and the final touch of watching Stone Gate 0 every week. It is really rare.