Dragon Ball: Two Android 18S? Who Could Handle That?

Fight description: good Dragon Ball regrets making amends: Tea God was not allowed to continue to become stronger by 8848, as well as Tianjin Rice Dumplings, and a large part of the Sarru episode was cut with the sucking and dragging scenes. Uncomfortable point: The system has too many cricket pendant tricks. Still want to know how the protagonist can improve his mentality? The final battle has to give way to acting. It was fine in the early stage, but in the middle stage, it has reached the second level. Are you still doing this kind of babysitter just to restore the original scene? The stronger the strength, the worse the protagonist becomes. The strength is so suppressed that he can hold down Zamasu with his breath. That scumbag just acted for a long time and waited for his teammates to be almost dead. So what kind of martial arts does the protagonist practice and what kind of boxing do he learn? System toy, just let him die a few times and forget about it. What's the stand-in? He loves to re-enact the roll call scene. If the protagonist is like this for a long time, he will be a proper system pendant. What other enterprising spirit do you think he has? After all, isn't the final battle also the main part of the original character? You just let him live as a ball from the beginning. At least it didn't look like he was practicing in vain. After practicing for a long time, he was still able to perform at the Super Series 3 level, but he was still a bald man who couldn't fly and had the combat power of the Super Series 1 level. There is also a boring Saitama template that has not been integrated until almost halfway through the book. The protagonist's growth is waiting for others to catch up every day before I think about writing a scene of pretending to be a pig and eating a tiger, and actually lies in a pig trough and eats pig food. The writing method is that of a fantasy novel about cultivating immortals. It has an early stage, an early stage, a middle stage, and a late stage, which is boring and serious.

Krillin is actually the warrior closest to a mortal, Yamcha is a mortal prodigal, and the other Dragon Ball warriors are basically abnormal humans or aliens. Therefore, the character of Colin represents ordinary people who are ordinary and hardworking. Most of the people who don't like this book are because the protagonist, Klin, is almost the ugly Wu Dalang, and he psychologically resists this kind of substitution. The author failed to deal with the shortcoming of having no nose in appearance, which is why many people cannot accept it. However, the flaws are not concealed. The story description and character creation of this work basically respect the original work, allowing readers to feel more involved. It also repairs some regrets to a certain extent, and the readability is acceptable.

After reading Chapter 3, the most interesting part of your book is not that the male protagonist becomes stronger, but that all the beautiful female protagonists in the original book are included, and then the characters are written with flesh and blood, and the picking up of girls and emotional scenes are wonderfully written. I've read some Dragon Ball stories before, and they're all pretty much the same but don't mean much except getting stronger. . .

It must be five stars, it feels like I have watched a different Dragon Ball again [laughing and crying]

The protagonist has a harem of 5 people ~ Chapter 200 and it's Double 18 ~ The plot needs to go back to the original line or strengthen teammates, so the system allows the protagonist to be an actor three times at critical moments. . . The writing is in line with the feeling of Dragon Ball, so I'd better give it a five-star support! ~

I like Bulma. The familiar plot is very immersive and the writing is very personal.

I don't know why the rating is so low. I personally think the writing is pretty good, the overall logic has no major problems, and it fits well with the original work. As for the crazy opening of the harem, I can only say that benevolence has different opinions, but I still hope that the author will take his time and not go too far.

It's beautiful. This is the Dragon Ball I want to see.

In fact, it is still possible. It is not easy to write Dragon Ball to this level. I guess too many bad reviews have been dragged down. The bad reviews mainly come from people who don't like multiple female protagonists. Old bookworms just want to watch something with speed. People who don't drive are tired of reading too much. The author continues to work hard.

The visuals of the fan guide are good, and the ethics of the plot have been straightened out so far [laughing]. The author will explode in the future.