HP: Born Noble

To be honest, the author's writing style is very good. I personally like Abu ~ but the part where Tom split his first Horcrux and lost his memory was too damn cruel 😭😭😭

This is a two-male protagonist story. James and Lily are dead. Harry killed Voldemort's main soul and took revenge. The original protagonist of this article is together with Tom Riddle. Harry is with Draco. Dumbledore is with Grindelwald. Abu is with his butler. The protagonist is a moon elf. This is also a childbirth story. Harry and Draco have a child named Scorpius. The protagonist and Tom have two children. After they got married, they were conceived using the elf mother tree.

I'm really happy to see such an excellent HP fanfic on Tomato [Blow a kiss]. The author's writing is very beautiful. It's great! [Laughing] It flows smoothly from the ancestors to the descendants, satisfying some of the regrets of the original work. Everyone has found their love, which is very happy. The story does not drag on and presents flesh-and-blood characters. Cyrus's growth makes people feel that he should be like this. The emotional story between Tom and Cyrus is also touching! [Sending Hearts] I can't describe it very well, but I really enjoyed this novel. To be honest, if there wasn't a real book shortage, I might have missed this book because I couldn't understand the introduction. I read it patiently with the mentality that there are few HP fanfictions and it's good to read, and then I discovered a treasure [laughs]! ! Come on, author, come on [fly a kiss] [fly a kiss] In fact, some characters are OOC, but I think it's okay. If you don't accept it, you can leave [Send Heart]. After all, preferences are different. I think as long as the main idea and part of the character's personality are not left, it is already good. This is just a fan, OOC is inevitable [Blow kiss][Blow kiss] I tried it again and it was flawless [laughs]

Actually, I don't particularly like it, but I think every book deserves recognition, so it's okay! Come on [send heart]

Although there are some forced CPs at the end, it is generally good. If you can't stand Snape being with men, or Abu being with other men, then skip it.

Objectively speaking, it is remarkable, the characters and plot are very good, and it can tell a complete story. I read that other book friends said it was ooc, and I personally think it is a little bit but not a big problem. I think the biggest problem with this book is that it is told too quickly and lacks details. For example, Cyrus and Tom confessed that they were natives and then separated after a few chapters. Then they suddenly reunited after meeting. Moreover, the connection between the context and the context is not very close. For example, school life ends in just a few chapters and suddenly changes from the main line of school to other main lines. The pace is too fast and it is difficult to change your thinking All in all, it tells a very interesting story and a sweet couple, but it lacks details and transitions when the plot develops and turns. I hope the author can polish the story and make it longer (because the story involves many people and things, it is difficult to tell this perfect story in this complicated background). The author has a great imagination. If he studies more details, he will definitely be able to write a perfect work! Ps: I hope the author can write a better HP fan, and I look forward to the new work!

It looks good. Although I don't know why the rating is so low, the result is good. I also think the decision to kill their main soul is a good one, because he represents killing from the beginning to the end. The other pairs of cps in this article also moved me, such as Snape and Matthew.

I accidentally clicked on it, but I fell in love with it. The character design is very full and not OOC. Some people don't remind or label it, but it's much better to scold it after being reminded! ! ! I really like it. Who knows how long it has been since I last read HP's good book about Riddle! ! ! !

Why not explode?

I really, really like the fanfics written by my teacher. When I first read Harry Potter, I was biased against Tom. At that time, I wanted to read fanfics about Harry Potter, but most of them were not to my liking and the books were out of stock. After reading the books written by my teacher, I thought it was a very novel combination. After that, I liked Tom more and more. After reading the whole book, I really like Tom. After that, I looked for a lot of Voldemort fanfics, but I always felt that they were not interesting. This book by Teacher is my White Moonlight! [Sending Hearts] Say the important things three times, I really like it very much! [Blowing kiss][blowing kiss][shy]