Re: Fang Yuan's Life in Another World, Starting from Zero

It's really beautiful and the writing is very good. This story tells us that no matter how powerful or smart you are, you can't prevent your teammates' stupid ideas. Genko will probably regret it a little. They are a bunch of gods, and the enemy has not come over yet. The inside has become like this, and they can only be forced. Happy reunion, yes 😂 I have been trapped to the bottom of the trap, and I can only go all the way to the dark side. Whenever I feel that I am ruthless and CS enough, I find that the actions my teammates perform make me look like a normal person, and the author's appearance description is really nice. It is not a loss to join the trap.

Not good! This is the real Fang Yuan, and the author really created it very well. The first thirty chapters were very tolerant, but in the end, the model worker's ruthlessness and consideration of the situation were fully demonstrated. In the mansion chapter, Ram was dealt with by taking advantage of the situation, and the part where he defeated Sloth after his death was particularly comfortable and very enjoyable to watch. The model worker's IQ occupied the high ground, and after getting the information, he was plotted by Sloth. So far, I think Sanctuary is very comfortable to watch, but it has not been updated yet. The author will update it quickly!

It's a very good novel, but it also has some shortcomings. Fangyuan's character is more in line with it. After entering the mansion, he first pretends to be sweet and then tricks others. The plot is okay. At first, I even thought that the protagonist could not return after death, but I felt that Fangyuan was a bit too exposed in some minor characters.

It's very interesting to watch, especially in the back part where the protagonist plots against everyone and seeks the best interests for himself. Those who should be silenced are basically silenced. Unfortunately, it still feels like it lacks some flavor. In fact, the author can pass on people's ancestors, [Similar stories can be interspersed with the nodes of the story to polish the plot. At the same time, they can also shape the protagonist or block people. It is also possible to directly localize and change the world view from scratch] And the protagonist, [in the previous life of 500 years, there were flying masters, insect masters, and similar skill realms], it is completely possible to learn similar magic in advance, explaining that it is also possible to directly let the protagonist adapt. If the protagonist also has experience in fighting magic, he can add his own magic to the protagonist's practice. Of course, it would be better to add some insect attributes. Or when you are about to die, you have an epiphany, and you can understand your own magic system by improving the realm of skills. After all, these realms of skills are rooted in the soul, and soul travel can bring them over logically. It does not affect the combat power system of the world view. You can also add a little bit of your own characteristics. I think you can try it in this aspect.

A rare fan of Fang Yuan, quite good. The people in the village thought that the little maid would die, but they didn't expect such a coincidence😃 It's really weird to listen to a book. Can't it be changed to Fang Yuan of an ape? [Like][Like][Like][Like]

It's authentic, the model worker is still cruel and black-hearted [face cover] [face cover] I originally thought it was another kind of script with bad intentions and good deeds, and everyone was having fun, but I didn't expect it to have the flavor of an immortal. The part about killing with memories was really well written. As a person who belongs to the devil outside the world in both worlds, Lao Yuan has such a strong feeling of not belonging and having to rely only on himself.

Just the character design without OOC is already better than most fan fiction, but it's not a cool article, so not many people read it, come on, author [like] I was a little disappointed. I came to see this because I wanted to see how Yuanzi operated it, but after seeing so many pictures, I kept being led by the nose. I felt that it was no different from the original work. So what is the difference between Fang Yuan and 486...

Fang Yuan's character design is in line with the original work. It may be a bit abrupt in the early stage, but the author's writing power increased later in the writing, and the more he wrote, the more like Fang Yuan he became. Secondly, I have never read re0. I always thought that 486, who can be infinitely reborn, is too useless. It wasn't until I read this book that I realized that 486's teammates are so amazing. All in all, pretty good.

It looks good. I finally woke up. Fang Yuan also has super power. The rest of the plot can be done as he wants, instead of being manipulated by the god or being tricked by the god's teammates. Maybe it's because I watched the original show. There are so many people who died here. Many people who were still alive in the original show are dead here. Although it is said that he has no information and does not use death to return, the immortal's handling of Minato and other incidents is indeed not as perfect as the original. Let's go to the Tower of Sage. The dialog box still affects the look and feel too much. I've been following the plot, haven't you done anything that deviates from the main plot? A little aesthetic fatigue The subjective initiative is too bad, don't follow the plot, Mr. Hu Yuan It's okay for people to die in the original plot, and I can accept Fangyuan's character, but don't keep following the original plot, let's have some original plot

The logic makes sense, there is a hint of Fang Yuan, and the characters are consistent with the original work.