Re:Zero: Your Name

Let's talk about the pros and cons. ① It is true that no one has written about this track. In fact, Subaru and Genko are two completely opposite protagonists in terms of personality. This difference is naturally the fuel for creating plot conflicts. The author's portrayal of the two protagonists does not overly favor one side. ② It fills in some details that were not described in detail in the original work, especially the political game between the five kings and the Emilia camp, and the impact of White Whale on the destruction of the world. Due to the title of the book, if you have only read one of the original works, 90% of the time it will be re0. With this in mind, this kind of operation of quickly skipping the relevant details that have been described in the original work and describing new things can still gain a lot of points. ③The outline is not too different from the original re0, but many settings details are still slightly different, but the deviation is not big. The author's modifications will not affect the plot development. (Brother Genko has never seen the original work, so I don't know what it is like, but I have seen the name and editing of Daai Xianzun) ④The biggest shortcoming at this stage is that the author's writing style is fine, but from my personal perspective, many plot descriptions have no sense of picture. Let's use a photographic work as an example. The photos are colorful and gorgeous, but there is no way for people to see the subject at a glance. This feeling is most obvious in the crusade against laziness stage. Often, only by reading carefully can the context be clarified. To sum up, let's give it a 5 points.

This is the Great Love Immortal. Even if there is no power, the overall view of overall analysis is no different from that of open mind (this brain is really useful). Subaru's growth has become calmer, and the group portraits are well described. I am very much looking forward to the subsequent plot development.

Overall, it's pretty good. The writing style is quite stylish. It gives a different sense of oppression to Moby Dick and Sloth than the original text. But the author gave me a very strange feeling, as if he had not read the original work carefully. For example, Betty must know Jus. Unlike Emilia, whose memory can be said to be sealed, Betty should be able to recognize him even if he is lazy and crazy. For example, Garfiel and Ram should have known each other for a long time. For example, Emilia must have been unconscious before entering the sanctuary. These are all details. Although it may not affect the look and feel in general, if there are too many details like this, it will look vague and easy to get scolded.

Many of Fangyuan's dialogues could actually be softer. He is unlikely to be so sharp when he has no power. In addition, I don't think it would be good if he didn't remove the original partner. If someone like Fangyuan enters the plot, he will definitely change the original plot. Otherwise, it will appear that the author is too deliberate. This is not good. I worry that the author will not remove the original partner and force the plot in the direction of the original. I think it should follow the normal development of the plot and not consider the issue of the original partner in advance. Fangyuan in this book is more like an AI robot with Fangyuan's memory. His speech is too weird and impersonal. This is indeed the essence of Fangyuan, but he will not deliberately show it in front of others. Now it gives me the feeling that the protagonist deliberately expresses his realistic way of thinking to surprise others. It's really commendable. Seriously

It's okay, but it's a bit difficult to read and it's troublesome to make turns in many places. The male protagonist's character is written more like Genko's. Then there is the fact that the Sanctuary seems to only restrict mixed blood. When will Genko use dirty tricks😏It's been a while since I've seen it. Regardless of whether it's for use or conspiracy, the male protagonist is still mainly analyzing intelligence and finding tricks, rather than engaging in a large-scale plan to actively make profits.

It's fun to watch, and the plot is not dragging at all 👍, but Fang Yuan's rationality makes this novel feel like you can finish it at a glance. I'm very curious about what Fang Yuan will do after he gets eternal life. Will he go back to find his first true love, be with Betty in this world, or will it end immediately? 🍉

There may still be flaws, but among the same type (everyone understands it) it is relatively restored🤓 Mariko was too cold from beginning to end In fact, Mariko's human flavor was quite strong before she became an immortal in her second life🤔🤔

Well, it must be because the number of people is limited, so there aren't that many people.

As one of the few fanfics, I think the writing is very good and the pace is not sluggish. I have read other fanfics before, but Genko replaced 486. The author can forcefully insert a character into the original plot without showing any plot conflict. I think This is very good. I want to know how the book will be developed in the future. After all, 486 and Genko are two extremes. Should we maintain it in this way, or should we seize the opportunity to replace it? 486 Can continue to grow🤔

It's good-looking (♥∀♥) much better than those mindless books. It has strict logic and is written with great feeling. Summary: It's good-looking!!!!!