Quick Transmigration: The Villain's Little One Is an Omega

The title is about two male protagonists. Will there be a CP in the future? Wa wanted to see Zaizai fall in love, and then the old father was so angry that he wanted to beat up that brat. Hey hey hey

This is too little, not enough to watch, the characters are three-dimensional, the writing is also online, and there are no loopholes in the plot so far, Zaizai is super cute, it is not enough to watch, fast forward to the marriage recognition! ! ! ! ! Strong Amway! ! ! ! Except for the fact that there are too few updates, there is nothing wrong with it. It is rare to see Zaizai articles that are so interesting to me. I haven't updated them for a long time. Now I update them every day. I don't know how long I can keep up. Finally, I want to say, why is such a beautiful article not read? There are more than a dozen people who push the button every time. This article is really worth reading! ! ! !

Zai Zai is very cute. I saw the third world for Zai Zai's sake. Because the Zaizai in the first two worlds have clearly become a part of the fathers' play, one star is deducted. Especially in the first world, it is clear that the father is a demon king, but Zaizai will be kidnapped twice... It feels like Zaizai, you exist just to get a cp for your father... The second world handles the issue of father's personality a little better than the first world, because from the beginning, It is said that the earliest plot in this world is a story about two male protagonists. From the beginning, the system told Zai Zai that he has two fathers. However, the purpose of Zai Zai's plot is mostly to promote the relationship between the two fathers... If Zai Zai were not so cute, I would never watch the third world. But when I wrote the review, in the part of the third world that I saw, the adoptive father did not have a CP for the time being. I hope that by the end of this world, the father will not have a CP. After all, this is a story about raising a cub. If I want to read a story about two male protagonists, I can read other works. However, compared with other cub-raising stories I have read, after the protagonist travels through multiple worlds, the reason why he is still a cub when he arrives in the new world is established, which is okay. After all, in other works with similar themes that I have read, it is clear that Zai Zai has experienced multiple worlds, and has grown up in some worlds for several years. His mind and experience should have grown to a certain extent, but in the new world, his mind and experience all inexplicably regressed to the stage of infants and toddlers... Although ignoring this does not affect the reading of the article, the author usually is inconsistent in the follow-up...

Does dad have Cp? When I saw the train rising, I felt that my father had a CP and was waiting for me [awkward laugh][shy][shy][shy] I prefer Tangtang to have CP, but I don't like dad to have CP, so I'm asking for a solution.

I'm so hungry, I'm so hungry. This article is so beautiful. The writing style is natural, and the characteristics of the small world are expressed in the correct details. It won't be a drama, but there are too few. [Please update]

Tangtang is very cute. I wonder if the first part is almost finished. I feel like this article is a bit long.

To clear the air for everyone - Zai's father has CP, but he is also a bisexual man! This book is still very nice, Tangtang is very cute, and Omega is so soft hehe! ! But I, Deputy CP Lei, can't accept that Zai's father has a partner, so goodbye Tangtang, woo hoo! If you don't want to watch the sub-CP, you must watch it, I highly recommend it! ! There's really nothing bad about this book, it just happens to have some quirks in it. I'm sorry, Tangtang! ! Just to clear things up, I see that many people are saying that Father Lin will have a bit of an OOC personality in the future, changing from the original cold and indifferent cultivator who only loves his cubs to a coquettish one...? I didn't read it later, so I don't know the details, but I'll give it a shot.

Emm... Three stars are for children, and one is for the author's hard work on coding. If you don't like it, don't criticize it. [Go crazy][Punch hard] The advantage is that the subject matter is very new and the baby is cute [love] The shortcoming is that the writing style is emm..., It has a somewhat distant feeling [Petrified] You can pursue it, but don't be too arrogant [salute] In short, it's okay, but you can't ignore the writing style just because the subject matter and the protagonist are well portrayed. It should be better later on. [Adoration][Flowing kiss][Flowing kiss] Looking forward to the author's subsequent works [in progress][top post][top post][top post]

Ahhhhhhhh, author, write quickly! ! ! ! I am such a cute and sweet sweetheart, how can you bear to make me unable to see him! ! ! ! ! ! It's really good. The theme is obvious, the story line is smooth, and it's very delicate. I just like it to be done slowly and step by step. Although there are some small places where the writing style seems childish, it's completely harmless.

The characters are more fleshed out. Personal feeling Lin Qingyuan's character design can be changed to A young demon master who didn't like practicing and was assassinated and traveled through time. You can add more overhead to the background. It's really well written, but some of the plot doesn't match the characters. In the plot of being kidnapped twice It feels like Lin Qingyuan has forgotten his own abilities (the author will explain it a little bit at the beginning). I think the reason is that the author wanted to draw out Huo, A node created by accelerating the emotional process between Lin and Lin, Lin and Huo. The early process was slow, but the later process was accelerated. Maybe it was because of readers' urging for updates? The plot details are inappropriate and the design is unreasonable. There is a feeling that the author has made a brief outline but started writing without detailed context. Readers urged, and the author began to rush to catch up...