The cold wind at Shattered Star Port swept iron slag through the air. The Qin family's little darling, missing for three years, was finally found in a drafty space station. Her little face was smudged with dirt, and she clutched a scrap of cloth as if it were a treasure.
Who could have guessed that this poor little thing, nearly frozen to death in the mud, was the apple of the eye of the mighty interstellar Qin family?
Once the little darling came home, the Qin family was turned upside down.
Her father, Li Qing, held her close to warm her, brewing batch after batch of calming incense and laying three layers of soft rugs along every path she might walk, terrified she'd get so much as a bump or a bruise.
The family head, Qin Munan, turned down a hundred-billion-credit interstellar contract and squatted in the kitchen to study baby food. One frown from the little one was enough to make him anxious. Anyone who dared upset her would have their starship torn apart.
Her eldest brother, Qin Chi, turned his sharpest mecha into a toy car. The entire Black Shark Guard took turns protecting her. Anyone who wanted to get within three meters of the little darling had to get past his blade first.
Her second brother, Qin Ce, cleared out the fresh starfruit in the interstellar marketplace, piling it higher than the little one herself, just in case she said, “I want some.”
Her third brother, Qin Yan, stayed up for three days and nights writing an eight-hundred-page development plan, covering everything from early education to interstellar safety. He even planned to vet her future friends in advance.
Her fourth brother, Qin Xiao, turned the training ground into an amusement park and rolled around playing with mecha models while holding her. He gave her his most beloved limited-edition model without a second thought.
With a piece of star candy in her mouth and a crowd of big shots around her, the little darling smiled, showing her tiny teeth. “Daddy, brothers, so nice~”
The household servants were stunned. The Qin family used to be as cold as an ice cellar, but now even the air was sweet with love for the little darling!
[The ultimate interstellar family darling + feel-good, angst-free story + an adorable child who heals hearts]
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The overall feeling is okay, but some of the descriptions have a flashy feeling. It would be much better if you make some appropriate deletions. Then I feel that a large part of the middle is about the feelings of the elder brother, and Nian Bao is rarely mentioned. The focus of this title should be Nian Bao, followed by other things.
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I feel that the writing is pretty good, even though the story is a cute story about Star Group. I haven't received a rating yet. It's probably because some paragraphs are too long, which makes people impatient to read. Also, if the story plot is more compact, it should be more attractive to readers.
The author, wife, brother, who is their CP, I just can't figure out whose CP is whose.
I really like the cute baby series. They are very beautiful and warm. Little Niannian is cute, well-behaved, sensible and cute. I hope little Niannian will always live in the love of her family, be cute and happy forever!
Looks good, no loss in investing
Does the protagonist have CP? The introduction didn't mention it, but the label mentioned two male protagonists.