My Succubus Disciple Is Trying to Seduce Her Master Again

It's still very good, logical and well-paced. Although most of the supporting characters are not much mentioned, there are many women among the powerful figures, which is not easy. Compared with popular articles of the same type, it is more realistic and true, and naturally seems inhumane. Personal acceptance is good (after all, there are many cases of gender swapping of one, two, and three-dimensional characters, and sometimes it's nice to deceive oneself and others). Suddenly I understood why so many time-travel novels set up the main character whose mother and father are dead or have no relatives. If there is a chance to go back, who would be willing to stay in a strange and even life-threatening world? Most of the solutions are to cut off missing each other. Is this a kind of splitting of female kinship? I thought that after marriage, female close friends will change much more than men. (Write whatever comes to mind, not against anyone, but if you are really pissed off, I suggest you think about it carefully) It's a pity that it wasn't be in the end, forcing he was like a lump in the throat. However, judging from the fact that the author's purpose in leaving the message was to capture popular elements, I understand that be is probably too niche and not conducive to traffic.

I finished reading it in one go. I think it is the most interesting novel in recent times. [Adoration] The setting of the male protagonist as a succubus is very interesting, and the later stage of falling in love with sharks is also very interesting. While watching, I discovered a small detail. There are many female characters in it, and there are no vicious female supporting characters. This is great. 👍🏻The story between the female protagonist and the male protagonist is very exciting, with many twists and turns in the plot. It is fascinating. The ending made me feel that the female protagonist and the male protagonist have a sense of fate [I almost cried]. They are all little pitiful beings who were not expected to be born and have no names of their own. The author's words in big letters made my heart ache. The sweet ending is really about two pitiful little pitiful littles joining together to keep each other warm [almost crying]. There is no procrastinating plot in the whole text. It is a wonderful story. I support the author greatly! ! [Love]

It's only natural to be selfish, but fortunately it ended well. If the heroine could see him one last time before grandma, I feel that he would reconcile with himself faster. Later, if the male protagonist knows that the female protagonist will come back, there will be less complications and misunderstandings. Alas, overall it's good. I feel sorry for both the male protagonist and the female protagonist. Damn my heart, it hurts so much. I felt like they were being abused.

Five stars for the author's settings and the fact that he did not give up on this novel. Although there are many shortcomings, it is still okay for a debut novel. Because I prefer to read the emotional line, I don't easily evaluate the plot line. I still feel that the emotional line is a bit sudden. I still think it is better to have a gradual emotional line between the male and female protagonists. It feels like Qi Zimu suddenly fell in love with the female protagonist and I feel that the female protagonist's feelings for him are too little. , The emotional investment of the two people is not equal, there will inevitably be a lot of conflicts, and the ending feels a bit rushed, because the heroine is willing to be with the hero at the end. According to the original plot development, I am actually more inclined to two people be () I feel that the author is more focused on the plot line, so he may not take into account the emotional line well. I hope the author can handle this problem if he wants to open the next book [Sending my heart] [Sending my heart] This setting is really delicious. . The following is a female master and male disciple, and the male protagonist is a succubus. Since it is a succubus, it needs a plot with strong sexual tension. Some of the ambiguous scenes in the book are well written, but they are a bit sparse. As for the plot, I have no idea and there seems to be no big problem (? (If there is a big problem) Don't blame me because I didn't read the plot with my brain.) In short, I give the author a big five-star rating. Any imperfect work deserves recognition. The author must pay attention to the gradual progression of the emotional line when writing books! And many readers like to see two people in love instead of hurting each other! I wish the author can create better works in the future! ! ! [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]

Super invincible and beautiful, it is one of the few good books that I have been following [Flowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss]

It's so sweet, I hope there will be more extras. The male protagonist is very clever, very smart and sweet. And there are many emotional dramas. I like to watch the emotional games between male and female protagonists [shy][shy] I have finished reading Ya Ya Ya, and I personally feel pretty good about it. The ending is very clear. The same goes for my senior brother and Yuan Gu Ya. I was sad to see their story at first, and I hope they can be together. In the end, the lovers finally got married [shy][shy]

It's best if it's written as be

The male protagonist really loves the female protagonist [thinking], no matter what the female protagonist does to her, for the female protagonist, love is never the first priority, so the male protagonist's love brain is abused [laughing]

Really pretty, no kidding

Not bad, a little sweet note before going to bed