Dream of the Red Chamber: Watching the Tower Rise

Gold and jade bracelets, not golden training and jade training The protagonist plundered slaves from five families, and in the end the total amount was more than 500,000 taels. I felt that it was not that little. The Lai family robbed the big one and Lai Erliang, and it felt like this was the number. The other families should have less. Everything else is pretty good [like]

Let me express my opinion first. This is the way I like to describe it. It moisturizes things silently. There is not much nonsense, it is completely about the protagonist's thinking, and the supporting characters appear one after another. There is not much description space. Unlike other novels, one supporting character has to write a chapter, and you don't know who the protagonist is when you look at it, or the whole process is self-righteous and over-thinking. The story has the flavor of a martial arts novel, which is also a highlight. As for fan fiction, as long as it describes the possibilities, as long as it can be logically closed, it is a good story. If it completely follows the original thinking, then what's the point? What's more, the story unfolds very naturally, without any pretense or superimposed words. The logic is clear and the introduction is clear. The introduction mentioned that it was the first book on the theme of Red Mansions. After reading more than 30 chapters, I could not see the traces of my debut. I also read the author's introduction. Sure enough, I came from the Siheyuan. This is a camp and a soldier. It is commendable for courage and deserves five stars. I look forward to not collapsing.

I saw the author saying to give it a rating. Personally, I feel quite comfortable with it, but it's not the same as the mainstream, so not many people read it [Thinking]. First of all, the narrative of the text is quite different from other novels I have read. It is not so straightforward. In other words, it is not Shuangwen's "little white novel" style. Secondly, the plot is a bit slow and focused on personal life (I can accept that I can't survive the fight for two more days). It is different from the Red Mansion novels I have read before. There will be less content in the hospital and more originality. To sum up, you can give it a try and take a look. My personal ranking will be in the middle or above what I have seen, and who can see this little amount every day [angry]

The plot is okay so far. It's not like some Dream of Red Mansions novels where you just start killing everyone and start a harem. The author deserves great encouragement (๑•̀ㅂ•́)و✧ and hopes to persevere and maintain this style.

The plot is narrated, and it is indeed different from what I have seen before. The logic is clear, the characters are distinct, and the major supporting roles appear one after another. As the introduction said, if this style can be maintained without collapse, it will be a masterpiece.

Four stars for encouragement. Overall it's good, but the writing lacks a lot of modal particles and it reads very blandly. Another is to change the name of the maid, Yuanyang to Jin Zhuke. On the one hand, it loses the charm of the Red Mansion. After all, Yuanyang is an important supporting role in the Red Mansion. After the name change, she feels like a passerby. On the other hand, I have always regarded this name as Jin Jiala, which is very dramatic.

The author is very talented and you can learn a lot of new things from reading this book. Although it contains a little bit of connotation, the whole thing is written from a completely objective perspective. Unlike other fanfics, which completely whitewash the Jia family or look down upon the Jia family. In fact, the Jia family is just a shadow. It is a very common system in ancient times. You cannot see it through the modern system. Isn't our country's system slowly transforming?

The introduction is very simple, and the layout of the first chapter can tell that the scene is grand. After listening to more than 20 chapters, it is indeed narrated and gradually deepened. The settings of the characters in Red Mansions have been changed, and the characters are not divorced from their status. It is worth looking forward to.

It was only 5 stars before. After seeing the update, I came here to comment! This book can be said to be a rare Red Mansion novel. The author is a very good storyteller. He is not the sleeping hairpin of evil spirits. The story line is clear and rhythmic, and it is very interesting to read!

🍟🍔🌭 🌹All actions are impermanent. All dharmas have no self. Nirvana is silent. 🌹Contemplating the body is the body, contemplating the mind is the mind, contemplating the feelings is the feeling, and contemplating the Dharma is the Dharma. 🌹Contemplate the impurity of the body, the impermanence of the mind, the suffering of feelings, and the non-self of the Dharma.