My Fairy-Tale World Would Never Be This Unhinged

The author's writing is brilliant, the plot is engaging, the details are impressive, the writing style is fresh and elegant, and full of interest. It is a story worth reading. The main character behind the author is a bit too artificial and stirs up people's emotions, so he doesn't need to be treated as green tea.

Advantages: The author's subject matter is very good, the writing style is average for Tomato, and the characters are all very good. I give it four stars. Disadvantages: The protagonist's abilities and qualifications as a god are too low. He is not as good as a succubus. He is too delicate and soft. He has been plotted and has no blood at all. Especially in the illusion, the system inexplicably seals the memory of the protagonist. If he can't beat him, can he still run away? Behind the witch, you are a god and not a cowherd who is out to sell you. Do you have any temper at all? If you can't beat that wolf, can it still kill you? The change is too serious, the emotional changes are too rigid, or does the protagonist really like to be a dog? All kinds of obedience and over-description make it inexplicable and give people a very strange feeling. Bai Xue was just a little bit more fierce when pointing a sword at her, but she didn't have to pay any price. Bai Xue's character creation was not suitable from the beginning for taking the path of regret. How could a girl who was hurt and saw through the darkness feel regretful because she plotted against others? I like that the author has already thought about how to deal with it in the outline, otherwise it would be a poisonous point. Anna's appearance is very small, more like a tool person. If this was a female channel, I would choose five stars, but the male channel should still be more enjoyable. It's still too frustrating until now. If there is a reversal in the future, I will add a five-star follow-up review. Come on, the author.

Jujuju looks great!! The writing is also good. I think the characters are well written. The characters all have their own personalities and are not the same. The plot and characters are both good. Overall, it is a good article. [Blow kiss] Big boost to the author!

It's very beautiful, but why is there no one there?

The content and setting are very interesting and innovative, the writing is really good, the plot is also very interesting, the character of the male protagonist is also very interesting and often makes people laugh, and the author's writing style is also good. Overall, this book is interesting and funny, with some profound content. It is highly recommended and worth reading. Unfortunately, the rating of this book is not worthy of the content of the book. Good cheers, author [sending my heart] [sending my heart], I sincerely hope that this book will go further and further!

It's pretty good. I like this style very much. The high-altitude gods and the crazy girls who plan the gods [top post] [please update]

This book can indeed turn God into a class. The protagonist is a god, but that doesn't mean anything. The protagonist clearly knows that he comes from the people and goes to the people. Although he is a little naive, it does give people something to think about. It is very good. But it doesn't work well after chapter 39. Has the author changed?

I saw the update part one night. Generally speaking, it is pretty good. The male protagonist is a bit weak in the early stage, and the female protagonist is relatively strong. But when she develops later, she becomes quite powerful. I feel that after the early stage, she falls into the category of yandere Shura, so she is labeled as a pseudo-female. However, this may make the positioning unclear, and may not please both audiences. The author plays a lot of jokes, although some of them are quite abrupt. Personally speaking, this book should be above average, not 6.6, So I give it four stars.

Okay, author, this book really made my eyes shine. I have rarely seen such good-looking yandere articles on Tomato. Not to mention that the subject matter is so new. Come on, author, update quickly. It's not enough!

The male protagonist is very biased toward the Virgin, but I can accept it. The reason is very simple. He killed everything that should be killed, and kept the ones that shouldn't be killed. After all, these crazy women (the focus is on you, Bai Xue!) Are a bit yandere, and this novel is relatively novel overall. I really like it. I hope this author can keep updating.