
Honkai: Star Rail Simulator: My Script Leaves Every Player Devastated
星铁模拟:我的剧本让全玩家破防
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 350k Words
- Genre
- Anime Fanfiction
- Updated
- 2y ago
- English
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Why was that expert's Shennong post deleted? To paraphrase the original words, that expert said it was too toxic, unbearable, so we'd leave. My answer: 99% toxic vs. 1% non-toxic, I choose the latter 🙂👍
It's good. Will they find the main characters in real life later on? I hope they do. This is just a suggestion.
It's a shame the author didn't become a screenwriter at miHoYo.
It's great! I noticed the book mentions adding combat elements. Here's a suggestion: let players face off against a protagonist whose abilities are technically replicated. The background music should be different for different difficulty levels. Then add a full difficulty level (similar to the Simulation Universe DLC) so players can experience the protagonist's power.
I think you absolutely shouldn't let the protagonist come back to life later on. Just like that Genshin Impact story, just ruthlessly kill him. Absolutely no sweet moments, he can even die completely in the end, who cares? Just write it yourself, author 😏
The simulated plot is well-written, but the swordplay isn't sharp enough.
According to general theory, it's very good-looking \(//∇//)\
The writing is excellent [please update more frequently], the plot is perfect, and the characters are vividly portrayed. The legendary backstabber king, the Collapsed Star Railway, but who told you that backstabbing means you can't write about it anymore? Himeko's character was very well-developed, giving me a unique and novel feeling. Ryuki was also good. Then you tell me you're not writing about it anymore? It's a bit unsettling. I can only say the author couldn't handle the pressure.
It's pretty good, but the writing style is still lacking. The author could look at some fanfiction or angst-filled novels and then revise them accordingly.
Hey, could you please let the main character get into the main storyline? I want to see the main plot! 👍👍👍👍