Transmigrate Into a Book and Win Over the Corrupted Villain

Overall it's pretty good. There are some aspects that the author did not construct well. For example, Xu knew Fu's nickname, and Fu, as a powerful person, shows that she is very thoughtful and cannot avoid suspicion, but she did not suspect it, which is a bit strange. And about that jade pendant, shouldn't Fu investigate it? The development of the love line is okay, pretty good, but I don't understand a bit whether Xu has a confidant or other feelings for Fu, although so far, it has not been mentioned that Xu likes Fu. But, I quite like the characters of these two people, and I also like the setting. As for the story, it can be expanded a little bit. I think the introduction in the introduction is quite attractive. In this article, I think the story can be a little bigger to make the story richer. Overall, this article is quite interesting. After all, it is the author's first book. I think it's pretty good to be able to write it like this. I recommend reading it. I also hope the author will update it soon, haha. I'm really looking forward to the plot behind it.

First secretly leave yourself a five-star review It's over Lightning protection: 1. Fu didn't know his true emotions in the early stage, so he might be a little strange. 2. After Chapter 48 in the book, Xu Hui became inferior to herself. When she escaped from marriage later, she became increasingly uncontrollable emotionally, and then suffered from depression. 3. The ending may be a little rushed, and sometimes quite bloody. All in all, this is my first time writing a book. There is no doubt that I can't write well. Please correct your attitude before speaking. I don't like people who curse. Finally, accept the advice and welcome all babies to comment. If there are any typos or language errors, please@manman

This article uses anthropomorphic techniques and uses the form of questions and answers to vividly and vividly show the beauty and liveliness of spring. It also shows the author's thoughts and feelings of loving spring. The emotions are sincere and rich in implications, which arouses readers' interest in reading.

It looks good, but can you update 100000000000 chapters in one day? It's not me, it's a friend of mine who likes people like the heroine, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, ah, wife

It's a very good book. I can't express my feelings after reading it. It's obviously a very ordinary book, but it touches people's heartstrings. The image of Xu Youjin in it is very well created. People read it and felt that this book is great. I like Fu Qing in this book because she was moved by her sincerity and paranoid love. She may not love others, but after she met Xu Youjin. I just want to give her all my love. I feel that this book is very sweet in the early stage and very sad in the later stage. Overall, it is quite good [laughing] I hope the author will be happy when writing every book in the future. The author is in good health. You and I are just strangers. I hope we can become friends in the future.

Is this your first time writing a book? The writing is very good, I hope to continue to write more, I like yandere-type articles [get it] [love]

I feel like the progress of the heroine and the second heroine is a bit of torture for the sake of torture. Xu and Fu say they don't want it, and Fu always holds back. But Xu, it's like she doesn't have a mouth. It pisses me off. Author, please [I'm about to cry], please don't abuse me, be sweeter, otherwise my heart really can't bear it.

I like it, I hope it's not too cruel, I hope the protagonists will be forced to be separated by the system in the later stage, return to the original world, and then see each other again through some small episodes... These are purely personal thoughts and the author may use them as he pleases😁.

This book has a nice double ending, but luckily it ends with He!

Lily is a good civilization