Harry Potter: Hogwarts in the Marauders’ Era

How should I praise this book? Just like a person who is about to die in the desert and finally encounters a clear spring, I finished reading this book in a day and a half. I wanted to come and leave a comment, because I think a good work deserves all the praise. The story has a beginning and an end, and the plot is very smooth. There is no sudden plot, and everyone's character image is very distinct. However, I feel that Ender's role is a bit small. The author's paragraph about Rael who is in the circle makes me feel that it describes his character perfectly. During the process of reading, I saw that the author said that it felt a bit long and there were six grades behind it. Let me make a small comment. Suggestions, because I often have a lot of things I want to do that I haven't done yet. I hope the author will write down the ideas he thinks of in a memo, and then organize them, and mark what happened in each grade one by one. There is also an outline, such as Voldemort. Seeing this direction, I don't know how to defeat Voldemort and how to develop the subsequent plot, because so far, I feel that it is a small daily life. But I still have to say that this is one of the best Harry Potter fanfics I have ever seen. The author must work hard, I will definitely read it to the end! (*≧ｍ≦*)

It's very interesting. I like it very much. This book will definitely create a new world in Sirius literature.

I really love the character setting. It enriches the character image without OOC! ! ! Finally, as we all know, James is an adjective [laughing]

So pretty, so youthful! This feeling of being alive is real and fake. It makes me feel warm when I see it. That's right! I think our parents should be this young! It has the feeling of a group portrait, the wanton sourness and sweetness of youth, ahhhh, it makes me feel warm when I see it, I think their youth should be like this! Maybe it's because I happened to see the male and female protagonist's cookies, oh! Beautiful young love! What a comforting feeling! Because I've only read more than 100 chapters, but it's been very well played and not embarrassing at all, especially the description of Penny is really good! Lily and Petunia are super good sisters, they should be like this [almost crying] [crying] The James in it will not be the kind of rude boy who keeps pestering Lily. He is the James in my imagination, a well-raised and slightly spoiled little sun. I think the James in the original book is too opposed by the academy. Under the influence of thoughts, Sia is like a rope connecting them, letting them know that they have corrected their mistakes, ah ah ah, they are all good children [almost crying], I really can't imagine the whole generation playing together, it's so beautiful, oooooooooooooooo [crying], the author is great! ! !

Not enough~ Really not enough~ [crying] [crying] The plot is very full, and the characters are basically non-OCC. Besides, we don't know much about our parents' generation. If you can write it in such a way that I feel there's nothing wrong with it, that means this article is already amazing [rolls eyes] If you really want me to talk about the shortcomings. . . It just feels like the pace is a bit slow, but I quite like the slow-burn type [shy]. The biggest drawback is that the author doesn't update the whole school year a day (bushi

My second favorite Sirius fanfic, it's so good! No ooc either. I wrote a Sirius fic myself, but it was really like shit. I envy the author's great writing style! Give me a big pen refill! Please urge me to update, please do your best to update! I'll continue watching after I finish my high school entrance exam! Let me say it again: I really love this article! I also love the author so much! Mua! This is my first time writing a long review hahaha!

The author is great, I hope that Thea and Sirius will have some intimate actions when Ender finds out, (•͈ᴗ⁃͈)ᓂ- - -♡ This way the momentum will be greater. (I am good or bad ˃̶̤́ ꒳ ˂̶̤̀ ) Good-looking, love to read, more to come. The author is very lucky, come on!

It's so awesome, I'm the only one who has finished it! ! ! [Shy][Shy][Shy] I've read so many books, but I've only finished this one, and it's not enough! ! [Love][love][love]

It looks so good, I'm convinced, I'll give you my life, I'll give you my life, I'll give you my life, I'll give you my life, I'll give you my life, I'll give you my life, I'll give you my life, I'll give you my life, I'll give you my life, I'll give you my life, if I write it like this and send it out, aren't you afraid that I will spin 380,000 degrees in place, kneel down on one knee, hold flowers in my hand, and propose directly?

It's super beautiful [Adoration] [Adoration] I really like this book, the characters are very well drawn! ! And the male protagonist is Sirius! Come on, author! [Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates]