Ninjago: Garmadon's Senior Disciple

I don't expect you to update frequently, just don't stop updating. I don't expect you to create your own plot; you can add another character as in the original work, or make slight modifications. Just don't stop updating.

I'll try my best to update, author. There aren't many Phantom Ninja novels yet.

The part about this book that I read earlier is really hard to describe. The author initially misused interjections and exclamation marks, and the interactions between characters felt somewhat disjointed. However, the author gradually gained control of the rhythm and the writing improved significantly (this is progress). The author also created some new characters, which were refreshing.

Could the author please suggest a pairing of Kai and Mingyuan? If not, Lloyd and Mingyuan would also be fine.

It's good. There are so many romance novels in the Ninjago series, but this is one of the only two that I like that focuses on friendship.

It's pretty good, I like it. The protagonist's cheat ability isn't too overpowered, unlike other novels where the protagonist starts with all elements and is invincible, and the plot is awkwardly written. I really dislike that kind of story. This one is very good, I highly recommend it. While the protagonist's emotional journey is a bit drawn out, the character development is quite good.

(Smelling the aroma of food) (Elegantly crawling out of the soil) (Elegantly crawling into the upscale restaurant) (Elegantly sitting down) (Elegantly looking at the menu) (Elegantly ordering food) (Elegantly waiting for the food) (Seeing the food arrive) (Elegantly picking up a knife and fork) (Elegantly cutting it) (Elegantly closing her eyes) (Elegantly tasting it) (Suddenly opening her eyes)…

Not mindless, not a harem, not invincible, and with strong logic. The phrase "in the dark" runs throughout the entire book, making the "Abyss" seem like it actually exists in the anime. This is the best Phantom Ninja fanfiction I've ever read. Author, keep up the good work, aiming for a 9/10! (ง•̀_•́)ง

I really enjoyed reading this book; it's rare to find good Phantom Ninja fanfiction, and this one is truly excellent. However, I'd like to ask the author: is Youmeng the female lead? I personally don't like female leads. If she is, I might skip her parts later on, mainly because I'm not used to it. It's really good. One of the few high-quality Phantom Ninja novels. Whether Youmeng is the female lead is still unknown. At least so far, the author hasn't made Youmeng the female lead. 💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕

Keep up the good work, it looks great! ✺◟(∗❛ัᴗ❛ั∗)◞✺