幻影忍者：加满都的大弟子

不求你更新快，只要别断更就行，不要求你自己创剧情，你按原著那样来写多一个人也行，或稍微改一些，别断更就行

尽力更吧，作者，幻影忍者的小说还是挺少的

前面那里我看这本书真的是一言难尽。 语气助词和感叹号乱用，人物角色相处感觉不是很协调 但是到后面作者逐渐掌握了自己的节奏，越写越好（这是进步 作者也自己创造了一些新角色，让人眼前一亮 在原作的基础上做了有趣的改动 看到这本书越变越好，并且随着更多人的加入热度提升，真的很开心，希望作者不要放弃，多多更新 pikaへ　　　　　／| 　　/＼7　　　 ∠＿/ 　 /　│　　 ／　／ 　│　Z ＿,＜　／　　 /`ヽ 　│　　　　　ヽ　　 /　　〉 　 Y　　　　　`　 /　　/ 　ｲ●　､　●　　⊂⊃〈　　/ 　()　 へ　　　　|　＼〈 　　>ｰ ､_　 ィ　 │ ／／ 　 / へ　　 /　ﾉ＜| ＼＼ 　 ヽ_ﾉ　　(_／　 │／／ 　　7　　　　　　　|／ 　　＞―r￣￣`ｰ―＿6 作者是不是太骄傲了，五星的地步，等以后再说

作者能不能来个凯和冥渊的cp 不行的话就来个劳埃德和冥渊的cp也行啊

好看，幻影忍者爱情向的太多了，这是我喜欢的唯二的一本友情向的。

挺好的，我喜欢，而且主角的金手指也不是很大，不跟其他文一样上来就是全元素而且还无敌，剧情也写的很尬，那种我是真的不喜欢，这本就很好，挺推荐的，主角的心路历程虽然有点水，但是角色塑造的挺好，另外。 凯和主角是真的好磕！！！ 劳埃德和主角也好磕！！！ 都好好磕！！ 我TM磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕磕

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不无脑，不后宫，不无敌，逻辑性强。"冥冥之中”这四个字贯彻全文，把“冥渊”写的好像就是出现在这个动画里一样，这本书是我目前看过幻影忍者同人里最好的一本。作者加油，争取冲九分(ง•̀_•́)ง

我还是很喜欢看这本书的，很少看到幻影忍者好看的同人文，真的很好看。就是作者我想问一下幽梦是女主吗？我个人不太喜欢有女主。是的话，我后面可能会跳过女主的桥段，主要是看不习惯 真的很好看。为数不多的幻影忍者高质量小说。幽梦到底是不是女主还不知道。至少到目前为止，作者还没有把幽梦写成女主。💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕

大大加油啊，好看的✺◟(∗❛ัᴗ❛ั∗)◞✺