The Daydreamer of the Naruto World

She performed too well in the Kakashi test and in River Country. The character of the protagonist was directly exposed, making others realize that the protagonist is not an ordinary girl. Although I have never watched Lord of Mysteries, I can guess that this sequence is probably calculated secretly. If it is exposed, it means...

In my current opinion, this book is worth reading. This book touches on areas that other Naruto novels have not written about. The description of the characters is delicate and the understanding of the characters is too advanced. There is no procrastination, only the intrigues of the ninja world. The characters are created so well that I, the wild boar, finally ate the fine chaff. There are no poisonous points, only chaff. The combination of Naruto and the Lord of Mysteries may seem a bit ridiculous to you. I thought so too before reading it, but after reading it, you will feel that the author has blended these two themes appropriately. "Naruto" created by Kishimoto is originally a cruel jungle world. Other Naruto stories only care about the fun and don't care about the conspiracies. To put it bluntly, this book is just about playing with IQ. How can the protagonist survive in this jungle world without any brains? (The above are my personal suggestions. If you have any objections, I would not agree)

This book is so beautiful and so Machiavellian. However, in terms of technological reform, it is not recommended to write in depth. On the one hand, writing in depth is easy to collapse. After all, dimensionality reduction will cause many factors to seriously deviate from the original outline and plot. The subsequent plot of this character may be OOC. On the other hand, it may be too focused. Many novels about technological reform are full of problems, as if they are playing house and buying furniture, which is a bit off topic. I think it would be good to mention the technological reforms appropriately. More important combat technologies could be mentioned (after all, Naruto), but it would be nice to mention some innovations in food, clothing, housing and transportation. Don't focus on the key points [Thinking] After all, the focus of Naruto fan fiction is on the various plots of the original characters. They can be changed, but they cannot be made so that the plot proportion of the "original characters" (the protagonist's younger brother and so on) is greater than that of the original characters. If you miss this, no one will see it. You can focus on writing about the various obstacles encountered during the reform, conspiracy and conspiracy yyds[]

8:04 Is definitely underestimated. The writing gets better as you go into the later stages. Especially when Danzo Kuro Zetsu is deceived into a three-in-one hot pot, it fits the original work perfectly. I haven't finished reading it yet, so I can only say that this book is really well written. I will give it five stars. I hope I can continue to work hard in the future. I will mark it first and review it after reading it. I take back what I said. The more I write, the more confused I become. The first 100 pictures were okay, but then I feel like the author has changed.

Most of the writing is very good, but I am a little confused about the heroine's advice to Uchiha Itachi and Kakashi. Why does she want to show her intelligence and scheming at this time? Like when you were in the ninja school, you could do it by adding fuel to the flames behind the scenes and making people think that everything was entirely your own idea, right? I understand her need to have things go her way, but this can be accomplished more quietly, without having to be so pushy.

Cool! ! ! I just like the feeling of controlling everything. Your book is a bit similar to the Dreamer who was promoted from Hokage to a certain point, but it looks good. I suggest you refer to it more.

The author's writing is very good, and the plot design is very good. For the first time, I feel that the supporting characters in a Naruto fanfic can be impressive. The character design of Mutanoguchi is very good👍In the early stage, it was written that he would do anything to climb up. In the end, his death showed a little person's resistance to the injustice of reality when he was desperate, which made this character sublimated. Judging from the plot designed by the author now, as long as it doesn't fall apart later, it will definitely score 9 or above. Of course, I am just expressing my own opinions here. Come on, author, I will always support you! ! ! (✌️^ω^)

I feel it should be at a level of around 9.1. It is not suitable for readers who like to deduct the set combat power. It is situation guidance and the mystery is weakened in it, but the quality is very good. By the way, just change books after 168. If you like Akaashi, you can try it.

This is really good [take a closer look]. It is best to write content in fan fiction that is different from the original work without ruining the character [get it]. That is, you can see familiar characters and novel content, instead of adding a dispensable character and living a very familiar plot [cool]. Only those like this are excellent fan fiction. If the author works harder, he can also have a work that is different from the original work. Just like the relationship between Journey to the West and Journey to the West, it originated from another classic of Journey to the West [Blowing Kiss]

It doesn't matter what the combat power is. This book is just as good-looking without the mysterious elements. What the hell is behind that? Content is confusing