After the Cannon Fodder in a Tragic Romance Awakens

Why is no one watching suddenly? The baby is so sad, woo woo [crying] [crying] [crying] Give yourself a five-star review and reward yourself for continuously updating [laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing]

The emotional descriptions are very delicate, and the writing style is also very comfortable. Although there are male supporting characters, they are basically described in one stroke. The main body revolves around the two female protagonists. It is a Lily novel worth reading.

I don't understand why some Lily novels have troubles at the end? Did the heroines break up for some reason? In the end, they will either die alone or find someone else? He reconciled after the ending? Confession→Together→Break up for some reason→he(be)?[Smile][smile][smile]

I really feel that there is no need to pursue perfection in everything, and is the so-called happy ending really a good ending? There is nothing unspeakable or unspeakable. I think it is enough to let his aunt and his wife live a good life. This pair of them can make two people live alone until they grow old. Seven years, and they left without saying a word. Do you know how I spent these seven years? Don't tell me that life is not easy for you as a young man, and you are also suffering. He even said that you took the initiative to leave for my own good or something. It means that all the pressure is borne by you, even though you say nothing. The pressure is all on you. How much easier would it be if I just had to endure the pain for a while? I just need you to kiss me and tell me to wait for you for ten or twenty years. You will definitely come to me and I am willing to wait. Why did he leave? I don't know, but I guess there must be something unspeakable like what I said just now. I even said that the pressure is all on him, and the breakup is for my own good or something. I don't care, I was in a relationship with my first love for two months during my freshman year of high school, and then they broke up and I fell into depression. In fact, she came over to me to get back together in her second year of high school, but I didn't even look at her. Until now, I have never been in love again. For me, there is no need to repeat it again and again, it only needs to be done once. In the book, a chance has been given the first time. There is no need to give a chance the second time. Then what is a happy life? Because you can't make up for those seven years of mine in this lifetime, so I don't need to make up for it. Committing myself to you will only make me feel sick, and then I will be worried. Will I reach the age of marriage in my 30s? Because you are from the richest man's family. The pressure made you leave me again, got married or something? Of course, when you win me back now, you will definitely say that I will stay with you forever this time. When you left last time, you had already slept with me, and you were already over 18 and an adult. Even if your family cuts off ties with you and doesn't give you money, it's Peking University after all. And he is the top pick in the country. You can definitely support yourself by being a tutor or something. There is obviously a better solution. Say you care about the down payment or that? Parents who suddenly adopted you back? They were important enough to throw me away for seven years. Then when you become famous, you feel like there is nothing more to pursue in the world, so when you look back, you think, oh, this is a regret of mine. I am a junior college student and dropped out due to depression in high school, but I have never regretted it so far, and I have no regrets. If you give up and then look back when you fail or succeed or are mediocre, then your beautiful youth is gone, and you really can't get it back for decades in the rest of your life. Sometimes I really like to watch some BE endings. I am willing to exchange my unhappiness for your unhappiness. And I feel that I am not necessarily unhappy if I am alone for the rest of my life.

It's clear from the beginning that this is indeed a very good book (assuming it doesn't work out later). The writing is very delicate, the characters are emotionally rich and natural, very sweet and relatable, highly recommended! ! !

It's quite nice, and the details of the characters are well drawn.

Well, after roughly reading it and evaluating it, it landed smoothly, but slightly lower than expected. The plot of the campus stage is great, the characters are very vivid during this period, and the single-core processor is deeply rooted in the hearts of the people. But I have to say that it went down a bit in the later period. The first is the processing of character arcs: there have been great changes in 777, but the plot is too little, and some very detailed parts of the characters have not been handled well. According to my own interpretation (perhaps too much), Qiqi seven years later is a person who has moved forward, a person who has grown up, a person whose heart wounds have scabbed, but the scars have never faded away. There are many things to write about such an image, the tears under her strength and fortitude, the escape under her progress and progress, and under her wounds and scars, the beating heart of her first heartbeat is still repeated. As for Lin Mu, this image is special, which also means that it is difficult to grasp: the youthful feeling in school concealed her immature side, and even made this shortcoming an advantage in a specific period; but for Lin Mu seven years later, the situation has changed, as she said. It is said that she has to atone for this, but the description at this stage has too strong a sense of strategy and a slightly weak sense of atonement (not that there is none, but it is not reflected as a key point in most of the pages). This is probably why everyone keeps shouting "be" (I don't see the atonement that I can accept) If I have a suggestion, the rhythm can be adjusted in the later stage. In the stage of abuse, it is best to reflect Qiqi's unconscious sense of brokenness, and use this sense of brokenness to reflect Qiqi's true softness: after her own heart is broken and the pain becomes numb, after experiencing the unique and morbid pleasure of hurting the other person, she once again chooses to keep the other person away because she does not want to hurt her. At this time, Lin Mu's plot can properly break down the character. A determined heroine, under a series of emotions such as past regrets and current guilt for her lover, finally suffered a pain that was deeper than regret. In the process of Lin Mu healing Qiqi, Lin Mu must feel the sense of fragmentation. Finally, in the separation of life and death, we truly have the love that was lost and found. (I have only read a few novels, just listen to the nonsense of laymen @ Yansi ) It suddenly occurred to me that the problem might be that the seven-year separation is very important in the plot. In this plot, we lack the companionship of the character. We can only see Qiqi walking forward from a few words, and speculate about her broken heart, not to mention Lin Mu's hesitation, hesitation and confusion. Jumping in time itself is generally not a problem. Some jump ten years, and some jump one or two years. Seven years is actually not a very long time, but for these two people who are in love but have not yet grown up, too many things have happened in these seven years. So much that we readers can easily become bystanders, so much that we don't want to give them a happy ending without leaving any regrets. However, the author worked really hard in the later period. Whether it was trying to change the readers' impression of Lin Mu through hidden clues, or once again describing their relationship, these are actually quite good, but the problem is still the same - without those seven years, it is too easy for us to stand on the sidelines and ignore the feelings of the two of them. OK looking forward to the next one [cool][cool][cool][cool]

It's super beautiful. I really love it. Thank you for the author. The plot is really natural and heartwarming, and the relationship between the sisters is very touching and beautiful. Qiqi is petite and cute, but she still has courage and self-thinking spirit. Although she is clumsy, she knows how to work hard to make progress; Sister Lin Mu really takes good care of her sister. Although she doesn't say it, she is very soft and jealous in her heart. The personality collision and life interaction between the two sisters really make people feel very comfortable and happy. At the same time, even some of the minor characters are not stereotyped, and they really have their character traits (I just don't understand Xu Canxing's feelings for the two sisters). However, the author's earlier story about isolating Xiao Qiqi in school felt a bit too much. It is entirely possible that some people such as Li Qian were unhappy, but it was still a bit too much to isolate a cute little idiot with no brain in the whole class. Of course, later authors are also making continuous progress. This is the first book by the author Da Da that I have read. I will read other works by Da Da in the future. Reading Da Da's replies to readers' comments makes me feel that Da Da is a very interesting little puzzle. I hope that the author will do his best, come on, come on, come on, and complete his work according to his own ideas [Love] [Love] [Love] In addition, I have a little selfish thought: Life is not easy, so please be gentle with the knife, I really can't bear it. I hope everyone will be sweet and happy every day [love] [love]

Recommended reading, this book not only makes you not want to skip chapters, but also makes you want to read it again and again. It is so sweet and comfortable, and a little bit natural. Compared with the author's first work "Forest Without Leaves", this book is a great improvement! Five-star praise first. First of all, the layering of the plot has become stronger. From the slow approach, the temptation, the choice to face reality, to the meeting again, the structure is much clearer. The second is the progression of character relationships. The Forest Without Leaves makes me feel a little hasty, loving hastily, sharing hastily, and the experience is always not deep enough. On the other hand, this book is full of details, from Little Stutter's transformation like upgrading to fighting monsters, to Sister Lin's pampering and protection, to the ups and downs that follow, it is all well-founded, and everyone's thoughts and actions can be understood. Thirdly, the characters are portrayed in detail. Whether it is the two heroines or the family and friends around them, the characters are quite recognizable. And through the in-depth description of details, readers can have a sense of immersion when reading. For example, the little stutter is really cute, okay [laughing] Keep up the good work, author! Read the next one!

It's really good-looking. I've been looking for daily novels, but I haven't been able to find them. Now I've read more than 30 chapters. I really like the ordinary daily life between two women. I finally found a book I like. To be honest, I'm very happy.