Didn't You Want Her Dead? So Why Does Your Heart Hurt First?

I gave five stars because this book is both sweet and sad, which suits my taste. However, the shortcomings of this book are also very obvious. I would like to make a few superficial comments and hope that the author can give it some consideration: 1. Use less words like "a twinkle in the eye," "a hint in the voice," and "arouse a smile." It's not that it can't be used, but the frequency of it is too high and affects the senses. You can directly use adjectives to modify it. 2. This book gave me a feeling of being knife-less, as if the whole book was written around knives, always making fun of the heroine's heart without any substantial loss. My suggestion is to use many small knives in the early stage to pave the way for a big knife at the end (but I still hope the ending is he). The story line can be more diverse. For example, in the early stage, when the two people are in conflict and fall in love, you can write a few more things, slow down the pace a little, and then select a few to cut a knife, and then write a sweet one after the knife. I hope the author can take a good look at it. These are my sincere suggestions.

The protagonist is the legendary King of Endurance. He is seriously ill and has to be hospitalized every few chapters. He just can't die. If he wasn't sick, he would probably be the pinnacle of humanity, an ordinary humanoid Astartes.

Ouch, not bad. The author's daily update of the w word is quite scary. The main plot is relatively old-fashioned, but overall it's actually pretty good, except that sometimes the way it advances the plot is weird. Come on, author [laughs]

The heroine and the second heroine are enemies disguised as lovers. Even if they have a daughter, even if they go through many setbacks, and even if they are almost separated by life and death several times, they still cannot change the fact that they are enemies. If it is normal, they can still maintain the harmony on the surface. Once interests are involved, the second heroine (omitting 100 words here) will strike hard at our heroine who is worse than a silk flower.

I feel like Jiang really loves Gu. Even though Gu keeps pushing her away and irritating her every time, Jiang still chooses to be tolerant and forgive her. I hope Gu will treat Jiang better [laughs]

The biggest difference between this book and other books is that the characters are three-dimensional and vivid. The people inside are intertwined with various contradictions, and they are all three-dimensional and living people, not good guys and bad guys like facial makeup. Even Jiang Wanqing will choose to try to save her daughter at the last moment. The reading experience is satisfying and worth reading several times. What is this if it's not fine grain - ̗̀(๑ᵔ⌔ᵔ๑)εïз

When will I write a separate story about Gu Nianzhou and Mu Zhaoning? I'm looking forward to it [laughing evilly]

When can I watch the author speak in person?

It's really beautiful, thank you to the author [Shy]

Super beautiful, highly recommended~(¯▽¯~) This is great! Very diligent! Support