Hong Kong Films: Master of the Walled City, Ruler of Hong Kong!

I've read up to chapter 80, and I'm really starting to feel overwhelmed. Here's my review: It's incredibly tedious. First, there's too much setup. Second, there are too many storylines. What started as a four-way war orchestrated behind the scenes, only to end up with a different mastermind after everything calmed down. It's just too damn drawn out.

It's pretty bland, the cheat system is terrible, and the plot is bland with no creative ideas.

This writing is so tedious, it's already over 80 chapters and the only thing that hasn't been accomplished is revenge.

Damn it, one chapter has the protagonist, the next doesn't. Is this really okay? The plot keeps dragging on. Reading a novel without following the protagonist is really boring. If I wanted to see other characters, I'd just watch a movie. I'm reading a novel, dude. You're writing a novel, dude. What's the point of giving me so much plot about Karami, who's going to die sooner or later?

The timeline is bad; when Ding Ye was around, there were also characters like Lei Luo.

First of all, what makes you, a nobody, qualified to join a club? To join a club, you need to open a shrine. What makes you think you can inherit Babi's business? Besides, your book is full of scheming, and it's not very clever at all. All sorts of unknowns arise and you have to clean up your own mess. In order to avoid the story collapsing, you force a golden finger, making it completely uninteresting to read.

Does Tomato (the author) still have any good authors? Let's find another author and start a new book with this synopsis.

I just don't understand. At least a minor character like Jiao Pi gets a reward, but the main character's team doesn't? That's ridiculous. Otherwise, they could have designed a reward for killing the main damage dealers. That would be more believable. But there's no explanation for the subsequent killings.

He writes about how awesome he is, how high his IQ is, how cunning he is, how he's a master of intrigue, but he gets constantly criticized and has a system. The four-way war could be finished in three or four chapters at most, but he's padded out with seven or eight chapters. The system doesn't appear very often; he's just constantly attacking others and criticizing him.

Did you eat the system rewards, author? I noticed several of them weren't mentioned. Are you giving readers hidden rewards?