Harry Potter: After The Chosen One Develops Paranoia
HP：当救世主得了疑心病之后
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I've finished reading it, and I really like the trio in this book: Hermione, the big sister; Ron, who's always worrying about everything; and Harry, who loves to squat by the fence. The plot closely follows the original story, truly making up for many regrets. In the end, the bee was still there, the bat was still there, and the cat wasn't left alone anymore. This is the perfect victory after the thrilling adventure we've been hoping for. (To hell with the suicidal victory!)
Highly recommended! Harry is the only one who shines, with no romantic pairings, and there doesn't seem to be much description of Ron and Hercule. The trio just stay best friends for life. Although the title suggests Harry has paranoia, it's not that he's overly suspicious, but rather that he thinks about things more deeply.
Sigh, sometimes I really doubt whether Albus Dumbledore's actions were right. Was the greater good he advocated simply about bearing the suffering of everyone on the shoulders of one child? While I can understand, I truly cannot accept that if Harry had been born in a peaceful era, he could have lived a happy life instead of heading towards an inevitable death.
Overall, it's alright. The writing, character development, and plot are all well-handled. The only downside is that it feels a bit "boring." Aside from some plot reductions, it's basically the same as the original work. Perhaps it's because the story hasn't fully developed yet.
That's nice! So when will Harry use his glasses-removing magic on Professor Snape too? 😏
I especially love the sharp-tongued Harry. The Gryffindor trio's personalities have all changed; Hermione really nailed the big sister role. Ron in this book is so touching—he takes care of Harry when he has nightmares. Harry's emotional journey is exceptionally well-written; he's a very intelligent Harry.
The beginning is similar to the original book, but subtly introduces Harry's differences without feeling abrupt. Later, this neuroticism causes the plot to branch off, and the trio's sarcastic banter is even more entertaining than in the book, subtly winning over those who were disappointed. If you find the beginning boring, skip ahead and don't miss the rest; it's really good.
It's really good! But after glancing at the comments, I saw many people said they wouldn't continue reading because the first few chapters overlapped too much with the original novel, and others said they wouldn't read it because the thematic focus wasn't very clear. You guys are missing out big time!!
Harry's personality is very interesting, and his bickering with his friends is vividly written. It often feels like I'm watching myself and my friends arguing. I really like the ending, which is like after the great battle, nothing has changed, and Professor Snape is about to deduct all of Gryffindor's points.
I really enjoyed this book. Fanfiction simply adds variables to the original story, so why not add those variables to the original protagonist? A gossipy and suspicious, strong and vulnerable, intelligent and conflicted Harry—I would truly love that. The transformation of the Dursleys was also a pleasant surprise.