Harry Potter: After The Chosen One Develops Paranoia

After reading it, I really like the trio in this book, Hermione the eldest sister, Ron who is heartbroken, and Harry who squats by the fence. The plot is very close to the original work, and it really makes up for a lot of regrets. In the end, the bees are still there, the bats are also there, and the cats are no longer left alone. This is the perfect victory we expect after the thrilling adventure. (Fuck the desperate victory)

Really recommended! Harry is uniquely beautiful and has no CP tendencies, and there doesn't seem to be any description of Loch. This is how the Iron Triangle will make them lifelong friends. Although the title of the book says that Harry is suspicious, he is not suspicious but thinks about the problem more deeply. He will use his eyes that are similar to his mother's to benefit himself (referring to the potions class taught by Petunia and Si). He is a bit of a (pseudo) white flower/green tea Harry. Compared to the original Harry, his character will be stronger in the later period. Pre-viewing tips (contains some spoilers: ▪️There are some original content on the relationship between the Dursleys and Harry, including whitewashing scenes, but I like the changes very much. I feel that the characters are more fleshed-out, so don't like it if you don't like it. ▪️The part about Sirius James being bullied when he was young is not whitewashed. Harry will know what the Marauders did to Snape, and will call Sirius the stupid dog godfather, liking the caution of the Marauders. ▪️The conversation with Dumbledore will be sharper. He will think about who he is, and "he is a Horcrux" and "he needs to kill him with his own hands." These are the conclusions that Harry came to after thinking about himself. Recommended index ⭐⭐⭐⭐✨

Alas, sometimes I really wonder whether Albus Dumbledore's behavior is correct. Is the greater good he pursues to bear everyone's pain on a child? Although I can understand it, I really can't accept it. If Harry was born in a peaceful era, he should be able to live a happy life instead of heading towards a certain death ending.

Overall, it's okay. The writing, characters, and plot are well grasped. It's this point where it feels a bit "too boring" except then some of the plot is reduced and the rest is basically the same as the original. It may be that it has not yet developed in the first grade. Here are some more exciting points, just like your previous novels, they are all interesting, although the previous ones also had a few bugs. Although this article has fewer bugs, it has fewer interesting points and the novelty is gone. I dare not say that I have been able to read through this book, but I feel that it will not give me too many surprises before I get to Prisoners.

Very nice! So when will Harry use the glasses-removing technique on Professor Snape? [Laughing]

I particularly like the sharp-tongued Harry. The three Gryffindors have all had their own changes in character. Sister Hermione has mastered it. Ron in this book is so touching. He will take care of Harry who has nightmares. Harry's journey is very well written. He is a very intelligent Harry.

The previous content is similar to the original work, but it subtly describes the differences between Harry and the original work without being abrupt. Later, due to this neuroticism, the plot begins to branch off. The daily life of the three little ones with their poisonous tongue is even more fun than the original work, and they unknowingly save the troubled people. If you feel bored in front, you can take a quick look and don't miss the ones behind. It's really good. After reading the full text, it's a bit short, but overall it's a good fanfic. It's great that everyone achieved victory without sacrifice.

Very beautiful! But after taking a quick look, there were many people in the comment section who stopped reading because the previous chapters overlapped too much with the original work, and there were also people who stopped reading because the theme of the theme was not so obvious about suspicion. You've lost a lot of money! ! This book is really very good-looking, has a very happy ending, and is rigorous in thinking. There are no cheats in the whole book. Regarding the high overlap rate with the original work, to be honest, I have read many HP fanfics and their overlap rates are very high. After all, there are only a few main lines, and they basically follow the main line. There are a few that do not follow the main line. In the end, they are all cheating, or the heartthrob system or time travel and other characteristics. In short, this book is really one of the two best HP fanfics I have read since joining this circle. It's not as cookie-cutter as what I've seen before. It's trying to make up for the regret I felt when watching the original work, but at the same time it retains the feeling that the original work brought me. I hope more people can discover this good book.

Harry's character is very interesting, and his quarrels with his friends are very vivid. I often feel like I saw my friends arguing with each other. I really like the ending, as if after the war, nothing has changed, and Gryffindor's points are about to be deducted by Professor Snape.

Like this one very much. Fandom is nothing more than adding some variables to the original work. Why can't we choose to add this variable to the original protagonist? A Harry who is gossipy and suspicious, strong and vulnerable, smart and disconnected, I can really love him. The transformation of the Dursley family is also very surprising. There is no blind darkness or whitewashing, and the plot is basically logical and self-consistent. The plot between Ron and Hermione is also very natural. It can be said that every corner of the iron triangle is very strong, and there is no such thing as "who is whose flaw". The writing style is also interesting, I often laugh when I read it. I hope the rating can be higher so more people can see it.