Haikyuu!!: The Lion King Plays Ball in a Cat Crowd

It is best for the author to add some scene and descriptive pictures. Readers' associations need to be based on. Without these frontal and side descriptions, it will be very flat. For example, if the serve is the protagonist's signature, he can add some oppressive descriptions to him, such as "heavy artillery", "everyone lost their voice", "when the volleyball is hit, the volleyball will ripple in the palm of the hand, and it will be completely dented". Otherwise, it will be too flat and it will be difficult to conceive of the picture just by speaking. However, I am optimistic about you writing about volleyball boys, and I hope the author will continue to work hard. You can take a look at a book that also writes about young volleyball, starting from a volleyball boy. The protagonist's serve and heavy artillery are described in a very oppressive way.

I finally waited until someone wrote Yinju. Please don't be a eunuch! ! ! !

The fantasy team in the accommodation chapter is very good. In a sense, it can really be said that it satisfies the situation that many teams failed to match during the Spring High School period. I have no regrets about not being able to fight in the last match, and the characters, including the plot, are all quite reasonable, and it's been well received.

Overall it's pretty good, but the ending feels a bit sloppy. I still want to watch Harutaka. I feel like there are foreshadowings in some places but they are not brought out later. For example, Mitsui Sora's countdown trap for serving, but it disappeared after he was injured. There is no writing about when the countdown trap closes the net. But other than these, the overall story is good. It's more "career" and not much for daily life. Those who like to watch games can watch it, but it's just The game is a bit too detailed, the length is too long, and the detailed arrangement is not very good, which may prevent readers from reading. Simply put, the game is a bit boring, and the description is too detailed. However, the original intention of writing the article is because I like small volleyball. Everyone is growing up. I hope the teacher's writing will get better and better. Although it has been a long time since the teacher's college entrance examination, the teacher's life is still going smoothly. Academic success, health and safety [love]

Why is the score so low? Did someone deliberately lower the score? I personally think it is quite good, especially the daily content is very interesting, and the protagonist is also very humorous. It can be said that the most intuitive shortcoming is that there are too few, and I have not continued to write. I hope the author will continue to work hard to write the second book to be more "upgraded". I will continue to support DaDa[shy][send heart][send heart]

It looks good. It looks good. I really like watching Mitsui's serve. It's so handsome.

The author can also write about his daily life with his family. Wouldn't it be too monotonous if he only writes about volleyball?

Very nice, but a bit lacking

Very nice. [Blowing a kiss][Blowing a kiss] I have been following the author since he first published it. Really, it is not easy to find a volleyball fanfic, and it is of such high quality. I think his character design is very good. And many of his volleyball games are written very seriously. Really, the author basically doesn't take any leave every day. I'm not the type to run away from time to time. It's not easy to think about the plot every day. I'm really supportive, but this book still felt sad. [Crying][Crying][Rolling eyes] The author's writing is very good, and it's fun to follow this book every day. But suddenly I stopped writing. When I saw that the label on the book list that was updated every day changed to Complete, I felt empty in my heart. I will still treasure this book. [I'm about to cry][I'm about to cry] Many friends around me have also read it after recommendation, and they all think the writing is very good. It's really, really, really beautiful. [Thinking][Thinking][Thinking]

Nice! Everyone is so cute~ Everyone's interactions are also fun~ Mitsui looks bad in the game, but pretends to be good in the game! So far a nightmare for all free men! I really like this kind of character.