Anime Crossover: The Nohara Brothers

Give your own evaluation I hope everyone can give me more support.

Well, it's a bit of a mixed bag of characters, but the plot is decent. How to put it... My answer is "Excellent," but it's not quite average or perfect. It's still a fairly good one. Although the cast is a bit complex, the inclusion of more slice-of-life elements is nice.

Don't deliberately emphasize Xiaofeng's intelligence and how he always makes mistakes compared to Xiaoxin. Meiya suggests learning from Xiaofeng to help younger children who don't like being controlled by their parents. This part could be changed to Meiya's spinning punch. After that, there shouldn't be any major problems. I'll write it down later. Thank you.

It's a really good novel, keep it up! (ง •̀_•́)ง Author, I'm waiting for your congratulations! ヾ^_^♪ Shin-chan's story is going to be very long, haha, keep it up! (ง •̀_•́)ง

It's so beautiful, but almost no one is commenting.

Write well. I love this book. It's super good and the audiobook is amazing.

I hope it won't be abandoned; so many Shin-chan fanfics have been abandoned.

This is a good first attempt! Does it include Ultraman?

The novel is excellent, and I hope the author will continue writing. I've already finished reading it, and it's very enjoyable.

All I can say is that it's fantastic, very beautiful, keep up the good work!