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I think the protagonist should retain a trace of sanity in the midst of madness. It is not a good thing to sink into death. I hope the author can write the protagonist beyond death. Come on, come on

What a great book. Why isn't it popular? Don't worry, the author will read more. I'll help you with recommendations.

Why is it gone? I feel emor. It's another lonely night. Can the author come to my dream and tell me a few chapters? (｡í _ ì｡)

It looks great. I feel that the protagonist should not rely too much on death. He should steal some of the abilities that are as supreme as death. By then, he will have all these supreme and unspeakable abilities as the ultimate monster.

It is a very interesting book. It incorporates its own ideas on the Cthulhu level without being trapped by the weird fairy template. It has new ideas and the writing is good. It is a rare good book that Tomato can find.

Not bad, it's more interesting, but I don't know why it's not popular. As long as the author doesn't give up on the book, I will keep following it. Come on, author.

Yes, it's well written. I personally like this type of writing better.

I feel that it is well written. If you can stick to the transition of some chapters, this book will definitely be good. Anyway, I have been reading the latest chapter. I feel that the writing is quite interesting. Come on, author.

It is a very typical Daogui style, with outstanding folk customs and Ketai elements, especially the strong local Chinese flavor. It's very good, and some improvements have been made: the realm has been added to facilitate upgrading and fighting monsters. Although the realm is written and not written, it is still improved on the basis of Daogui. The small improvement is still an improvement. But the pace is slow, which is not good in Tomato Rhythm is a big problem. One of the main plots is to become a Night God. I have read 400,000 words about this story, but I haven't even reached the base of the Night God yet. This is too slow. Why is it not good to write about other things? Because if you write too much about emergencies, readers will not have a clear perception of the context, and they will not be able to remember what you are doing and what to do. A clear main line is an important means to increase memory points. Telling a story is easy to abstract and remember. I can't remember it if I write it loosely. If you can't remember it, it will just gather dust on the bookshelf.

A time traveler with a point-adding system and time archive comes to a distorted and distorted world of immortality, and constantly improves himself along the way. This improvement is not only the realm, but also the ability to accept pain, distortion and pollution. I wonder if the protagonist will be assimilated by these twisted things when he reaches the end?

Yes, it is indeed weird. It is very in line with the Chinese elements of Cthulhu. The latter part is integrated into reality with a mental hospital in the real world.

It's very interesting. I think what moved me the most was the protagonist. He was trying hard to restrain himself and have confidence. Then the author also wrote it so that you can feel the protagonist. He is not invincible. He is an individual who is always growing and constantly cycling. The only thing that made me a little bit unbearable was probably the protagonist and the 10-year-old little girl. . . Hey, I don't know what to say, but the protagonist has many skills that he will use crazily in a period of time, and then if he uses new moves later, he will not use the previous moves again, even though the previous moves may have been very awesome. I think this book is really good to read. The pace is pretty good. It's not too slow or too fast. I'm the kind of person who likes the plot to be more compact. At first, I came here because of the protagonist's initial sense of madness. But later on, I realized something was wrong. The protagonist didn't seem as crazy as he did at the beginning. Oh, again After watching it, I found that the protagonist is actually restraining himself. This is what I like about the protagonist very much. Moreover, the protagonist has very positive views and plays well, which is very refreshing. If the early stage is about frantically running for power, the middle and late stages are about satisfying one's own sense of lack and starting to explore the inner path. (Maybe not, maybe my focus is different)

Good-looking, super good-looking, blow it up [send heart]

The author writes more about weird things. The sacred book in my mind is about the weird world of cultivating immortals. The weird and weird types in it are really exciting. Unfortunately, it is a bit long-winded in the middle and unfinished at the end, but it is still a refreshing book and very novel.

The protagonist has become a villain! This world without hope now does not deserve to exist!

It can be renamed Xu Huowang's Travel Notes

Extraordinary, star changes, moonlight, sun halo, Dan Xi, Huangji, King Kong, celestial phenomena, immortals and Buddhas, unknowable. If you can't remember, you can check it out at any time👀

Okay, this is the only book in Tomato🍅 history that kept me going until chapter 178. It's very good.

Like a weird fairy

It's good, but the main character isn't crazy enough. If he's a little more crazy, he can write it like some authors don't dare to write.

Already starting to worry about the author's mental state

It's really beautiful, but why are there so few people?

There were dark clouds outside the window, so I said I would stay in my room and eat a bowl of noodles.

It suits the appetite of a forty-year-old bookworm like me.

There are very few works that I judge as masterpieces, but I dare to call this one an absolute masterpiece.

Why is this book so good but the data is so miserable?

I'm a bit epileptic. I'm afraid. I'm afraid that Master Dao will suddenly realize it.

The crazy world cannot be described by common sense. Everything you think is illogical is only in this world. This book is beautiful. Very

It's quite interesting, I like the main character's mental state❛‿˂̵✧

I hope the author will continue to maintain this mental state [eating melon]