The Marquis's Legitimate Wife

The author's writing is very nice, and the characters are vividly described, making the readers full of desire and endless aftertaste.

It's great to watch, but the updates are too slow. By then, I've forgotten everything I read earlier.

The writing is very good and everything happens in a coherent manner. The following is just my personal opinion: Before Chapter 46, I felt that there was a fair cooperative relationship between the male and female protagonists. After that, the attitudes of the male and female protagonists changed too quickly. The fight for the heir mentioned above also involves several in-law relationships. The future relationship between the male and female protagonists will be very awkward. This is a fact that the male and female protagonists know early on. I thought that the female protagonist will perform the cooperation competently and just want to leave one day. This is also in line with the introduction setting and the inner thoughts of the female protagonist. Chapter 46 should be the emotional turning point of the heroine's heart. When it comes to the second wife, the Feng family is cool and interested in profit. The heroine was sober and rational at the beginning, but she feels that this part of her thoughts is very calm. The hero punishes the second aunt afterwards just to compensate. In the chapter where the male protagonist asks for marriage, he has done nothing for the female protagonist before. It is true that the female protagonist felt grievances in the early stage, and it is true that she is walking on thin ice at home. She also has a vicious sister-in-law. Chapter 70 shows that the male protagonist has always known her sister-in-law's feelings for him. The female protagonist also reminds her that something is wrong. The male protagonist has not taken precautions. The female protagonist has been in trouble one after another. The male protagonist has been saying that neglecting the back house in Kyoto is dirty, but he does not change it. The heroine's recent updates seem to be more and more love-oriented, and the hero and the heroine are in the same frame from the consummation of their marriage just to make love. I don't mean that I don't want to see a relationship, I just feel that this change is really too fast. The heroine is sober and sensible. Even if her parents didn't love her in the past, she grew up under the care of her grandmother and brother. She is not lacking in love, personally. I feel that she is at peace in her heart, and will fulfill her responsibilities and arrange a way out for herself despite the favoritism and indifference of the Feng family. This is because the heroine herself had thought about what would happen to her personal maid in the early stage if she was put in that situation, and the hero knew that the two of them would be in an embarrassing situation in the future, so she felt that she should exercise restraint, but suddenly she saw the hero confess his love and consummate the marriage. . Caught off guard.

This book began preparations in January, with a long hiatus. It was not officially released to everyone until mid-June. Unknowingly, it has almost 200,000 readers. Some readers have pointed out shortcomings and made slight changes to the areas that can be improved. Thank you to every reader who followed up and every review. There are still many shortcomings, but it will definitely get better and better. [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart] On the tenth day after finishing the book, I received all kinds of book reviews. I would like to thank every reader who expressed their opinions. It is indeed not a good article, so it is normal for readers to say that they felt frustrated after reading it. I will read every review. If there are good opinions, I will also take notes. The next book will be better. There is a high probability that this account will continue to post pure ancient words about not being reborn and not traveling through time. We will meet again soon~ Thanks again to every reader, Baozi~

It's okay, why is it unfinished?

It's quite good-looking, with a good storyline. Personally, I think the main plot is clear and the content is exciting. In particular, the psychological activities of the heroine are described in detail, and other characters are explained. The rating is just a bit low, I hope the author will work harder [Like][Like][Like]

The score of 7.5 Is too low. I recommend it.

It's a good book worth reading. The names are all very good and antique. [Like][Like]

It's very well written and really worth watching, and the characters are well drawn. Hope it can be longer. Don't end briefly [laughing]

This book is really well written, the story content is novel, and the characters are vividly drawn. I hope the author will write more every day.