Reborn: An Ancient-Era Refugee's Escape

I wrote this book on a whim. There is no outline, only a summary of the story of seventy or eighty words [laughing and crying]. I really write wherever I think of it, so the update speed will be slow and the logic may not make sense. Thank you all, little cuties, for following the article [sending heartfelt wishes]

It seems that there are no surprises at the moment, and the plot is also good. I hope that the existence of the space system will not be exposed to others. No one will want it, just the protagonist and his family of three will know about it. Even if the protagonist believes Huo Zhicheng, he still has parents. Although they have conflicts and are separated, if they meet later, will he not save his parents if something happens to them? Wouldn't this be exposed (only personal opinion)

It's been a long time since I've been able to read a book from beginning to end! I just feel a little bit regretful... I always feel that there are many more things to come, whether Xiaobao, Xiaotangyuan, Brother Jin, Fu Bai, and the Shen family's village chief are still alive... And has the child buried on the escape route been taken home... Too many regrets.

Why is there no rating for such a beautiful book? Readers are not good enough. The story in the protagonist's mind is clear in logic and the writing is smooth and engaging. Why are there no ratings yet? Come on, author!

Escape is quite new, there is no real need to follow the large army, it is the small road deep in the mountains that my D team takes [thinking], the hardships and freedom are also clearly written [laughs]. There is no too greasy character description, there are some typos, and there are some personal settings in it [laughing and crying]. . Overall it's okay, quite decisive, the golden finger is indeed used a bit less (similar to the introduction) But I already knew the early system prompts, so why not leave in advance? [Face covering] [What], this question confuses me [Face covering]

Personally, I think it's okay, it's pretty good-looking. I think some people really don't have too many requirements for the protagonist. He is just reborn and understands a little bit about what happened in his previous life, not a new core or a new brain. Moreover, he is just a real ancient person. Don't always make comments based on modern ideas. He is only an ancient person and has only studied for a few years. Can he understand so much? Do you think you are awesome after studying for a few years in modern times? If I throw you in, I guess you will be gone in a few days. And this is not a cool article. Isn't it normal to have a little suffering? If there is no pain at all and there is no cheating all the way, then what is there to see? Moreover, the hardships encountered by the protagonist have been calculated. How can it be so good to have a real escape? If you are not satisfied with this, please click on the upper left corner and get out.

It's a very good article. The writing style is simple and capable. It's not like the monotonous writing style in 🍅. This article has its own ideas, which makes it very readable. Write more about farm life after the disaster [currently working on the manuscript] Waiting for it [learned] [like this post] [ask for more updates] [send heartfelt wishes]

The front is in the village, the middle is fleeing, and the back is settled. Without the power of the court, it's just an ordinary rural life! Although golden fingers are helpful, your own efforts are also indispensable! It's plain and warm, you can check it out!

Red Pen is really good, and the characters of some of the protagonists and supporting characters are very good. It is a very warm article, and it feels like it is above 8.9 Points. Although the word count is small, some of the extras are also well written, and the ending is actually just right.

Good-looking [send heart] [send heart] [send heart] [send heart] [send heart] [send heart] [send heart] [send heart] [send heart] [send heart] [send heart] [send heart] [send heart] The writing is very close to reality [send heart] [send heart] I don't know why, but I just like the extra story about them going to the Flower Country. I thought Fu Bai could also go to their world, but it didn't happen [I'm about to cry]. I really want to see Fu Bai go to their world to relax and relax [I'm about to cry]