The Entire Interstellar Community Begs for Updates, Game Designer!

It's quite nice to read, and the writing is good, but the author doesn't seem to treat the female players as human beings. They are all brothers. There are no female or neutral words, and it doesn't look at whether the author is male or female. When I saw the updates, there are still only male ones. I can only say that it is a bit difficult to criticize. I don't know if the author will modify it. There is also the setting of Honghuang, because Honghuang was originally compiled by later generations, and different settings must be different in different novels. However, Chang Xi and Xihe, two women and one husband, are a bit shocking. If you can't accept it at all, don't read it. What's more, the whole story is basically Tian Li's words, and there are no female players at all. Well, I originally wanted to give a low score, but I am worried that the author just didn't think about it, or maybe he will change it, so I can only look forward to it. I saw some news, so I came back to see how it was going. After reading the catalog, the heroine felt so aggrieved. Why did those Tian Li harass you? They made such a big fuss, but you just let it go. You lost face because of nothing wrong. Is face important? Tian Li has gold at his knees and can see them kneeling everywhere. What's the use of face? He also said that betting doesn't count. It doesn't count what you bet. Moreover, he wrote several chapters about the plot of betting, plus more than ten or twenty chapters of foreshadowing. After reading the title, he didn't finish reading it. The idea of ​​going there is that the game is not bad, but other things are messy. The younger brother is simply a burden. And after reading other comments, I thought it would be changed. The result is that it is almost all Tian Li. Girls have some impressions of the female protagonist and an anchor. The author is Tian Li pretending to be a woman, right?

It's so beautiful. The world view of the second game is really shocking. I want to play this game [laughing and crying]. I feel that this game is quite culturally confident.

I beg for an update, ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh This article is completely in line with my preference: the description is smooth and the content is logical, with very few bad sentences. The content of the novel is an interstellar background, with the ancient Earth culture missing. The heroine designs a holographic online game as a time traveler. The written content has left some foreshadowing of the mystery of the protagonist's life experience. The current game content is based on a large number of ancient Chinese myths. It can be read from beginning to end in one go. The description of the big scenes in the game and the forum style complement each other. After reading the update, I am still not satisfied. I just want to beg the author to update 1,000,000 chapters [Sparrow Food Masterwork]

The content of the game is written in more detail, and it looks quite interesting, but is a game made by a female protagonist only played by men? Except for Qiqi, a girl who appears more often, the others seem to be all men. They are referred to as brothers. Moreover, they write insults on female channels and even mention their mothers. This is difficult to comment on. However, I quite like the writing of the game and will continue to read it. I very much hope that the author can change this male-oriented sentence structure.

The shortcomings are obvious, but the flaws are not concealed. It is great and great. There are not many articles about female video games and even fewer that match this theme. I remember that Lv Shui had read a lot of prehistoric novels and now the subject matter is much cooler, which is a double joy for me. Come on

It's quite good-looking. I don't know why the score is so low. It does have some quirks, but I don't think it deserves the score. The score is too low. I didn't read the first two or three chapters because I didn't really care about the important premise, I just wanted to see the content of the game. Some of the content is a bit toxic. For example, when exploring the map (which needs to advance the plot), instead of making a server-wide announcement, they privately chat with a certain player to help explore. This is very strange. I can only say that you should either change it or ignore it, because if the chat history is revealed, many players will quit the game, but overall it looks okay. It's cool to step into God's perspective. In my daily life, I look at it when I want to. Usually I skip it and just glance at it. There is still a hole that has not been filled. That Kunpeng didn't explain the cause and result after swallowing the book, right? I didn't see it. Update update! Overall it looks good!

This book is really good for the same genre, and there is no messy thing that will delay the heroine's career. It's very pretty👀👀👀👀. Just give it a try. I think it must be very good [laughing][laughing][laughing]

It's a good book, I like it very much. It has more than eighty chapters so far. The game was fun to write. The only problem is that there are fewer barrages in the back. There are some barrages left by book friends in the front to have fun and popular science. At the back, I don't know if they have been swallowed or something, and I can only see the barrages criticizing the titles (I know it's very harsh to say this, but I just feel like this. I went in excitedly to see the discussions about the plot, but everyone insisted on calling them "brother", which is really uncomfortable)

The plot of the game is quite exciting, but there are too many clowns. I just want to watch the game, and those business wars really affect my mood when watching the game. . No more chasing, what a disgusting business war, just keep this book until it is finished.

I watched it when I saw the recommendation on the list. It's quite interesting. With more than 70 chapters, it's just the beginning. I look forward to the follow-up. It's very fascinating. I just saw the updated part in a short time. The description of the game is super excellent. I feel that the scenes are described with great care. The writing is very graphic. I was excited when I watched it outside the screen, and my heart was beating a little fast🤣 I personally like the paragraphs describing the game () and I also gained a lot of science knowledge by the way. I hope that I can have more perspectives to appear in other tasks in the future.