Punishing: Gray Raven: Encounter in Another World

Come on, grasp the rhythm, and lay out a few more chapters before shouting slogans, instead of "for Liv" and "March to Hell" very quickly. Describe more big scenes and the determination of the commander. The details can be better. I look forward to the next update.

Among the Zhanshuang fanfics that don't have many tomatoes, the quality can be said to be the best. I think the speech, plot, macro and detailed description are all very good. Maybe the author has a better understanding of politics and history. I can only say that he is worthy of being a good leader in the new era with comprehensive development of morality (morality), art (art) and intelligence (intelligence) [blowing kiss] But should I say it or not, can it be done faster? [Anger] I can't see enough. Also, can anyone help me, this cute new chief, who is over level 90 and doesn't understand anything [face covering] Finally, I hope the author will update it well and continue to work hard to make this book bigger and stronger [shy] (The author replies to me) Chirp Mi Chir Mi

Now that I have read Chapter 27, I would like to express my opinion. First of all, coming from the neighborhood, I feel that this setting is quite good. The author should want to follow the flow of land reclamation and farming in another world. Secondly, the overall level of this book is above the average level of Tomato. If the author is writing a book for the first time, I can only say that it is definitely pretty good. Then, there are some shortcomings that I personally think. First, there is too little description of the environment in the different world and lacks a "sense of world"; Second, there are few psychological descriptions of the structure, which cannot reflect the characters in a profound and three-dimensional way, and the language of the structure is mostly derived from the "stereotype" of Zhan Shuangzhong, lacking the "breath of life", which makes people feel a bit fragmented; Third, the transitions in some places are too abrupt and the connection is not natural enough, but this is normal and 99% of Tomato books cannot do this. The above is just my humble opinion. Finally, I want to say The echo is number one in the world! [Sinister smile]

It's so nice [laughing] There are really few articles about Zhan Shuang, I hope the author can write more

After reading this book, what do you think? There is a feeling of comfort like using Fiji clams and the surprise of eating sweets when eating Akaashi

Although the unfolding of the plot is a bit magical, it is unexpectedly watchable. It may be a bit annoying for some demanding old bookworms, but as a small category of Zhanshuang fandom, it is really watchable! Come on, author, it's not easy to find a worthy warrior, don't let down our expectations! (The more you write, the more gifts you will get.) It's really pretty~

I finished reading it in one go. It was not enough. I got to chapter 23. I feel like this book could be called "About Me Fighting Doubles in World War II" [Thoughts]. If nothing else, the author's writing style is very good. I give it five stars.

Take a closer look at the good Zhanshuang fanfics, but they are not friendly to newcomers, and they are not very attractive to some Zhanshuang players who want to understand the changes in the plot of Zhanshuang. The reason why it is easy for fans to get into the game is because the world view is familiar and similar to the game. In this case, because it only brings characters, it makes it difficult to watch in this new world view if you are not very good at cooking and fighting with two characters. The most important thing is that for fans, the familiar world view is the reason for quickly getting into the game. After all, it is Tomato. For something as profound as shaping a new worldview, it is still classified as a fan, so it is inevitable that there will be few people.

Battle Double is great~ The characters are also well drawn, but crushing them in a low-level civilization in a different world seems to be uninteresting (-1🌟). I look forward to returning to the Dual World Gossamer Kurono and Konghua Pest in the future.

Full marks, please keep writing, this is the expectation of countless chiefs! May every son of humanity who returns to earth be safe! ! ! [Praise]