Dual Cultivation to Change My Fate, One Sword to Stand Above All

It's very good-looking, and fully describes the cruelty and unkindness of the world of immortality. Reading too many refreshing articles will easily make more people think that it is good to cultivate immortality. This book is the same as the world of immortality I imagined. The world of immortality is the same as reality. It is cruel and unfair everywhere. People at the top will never understand the sadness at the bottom. Come on, I like your book. Let me talk about the poisonous point of this book. This system is actually similar to having many children and many blessings! But you have locked up the function of this system at the beginning, which is very poisonous, and it will be difficult to write later. The pace of this book is slow, and after dozens of chapters, it is still a few levels of Qi training. I hope the author will speed up the pace!

It's a good book, but not many people are reading it now, but it will definitely become popular in the future.

Many people pursue online articles, but the author does not believe in evil. This deserves our appreciation for his obsession. This book can be called a clear spring of mudslides, and it describes the real reality. The characters and the author's obsession are written in the pulling scenes. It is beautiful [laughing]

I can't help but comment. When I first read it, the writing of the novel was jerky, but after more than ten chapters, it became better and smoother. Considering that the author seems to be writing the first book, it is really rare, surpassing 95% of the novels about cultivating immortals. Especially some explanations about the system of cultivating immortals make people feel clear and relaxed. Much better than many authors I'm not going to complain, but a really uncomfortable flaw in this book is that after the protagonist joined the Lingtian Sect, he never made any effort to contact Mu Xi, such as sending letters or something. Don't say that it's dangerous to be discovered by him, and don't say that you can't contact him. The question is, have you tried hard? You have not known whether you will live or die for so many years. Even if you drag someone to tell you that you are safe, you should at least try hard for someone you love so deeply. He lived happily at Ling Tian's house every day, accompanied by beautiful women. Have you ever thought about the person who loves you most and will never regret it? Don't say that you think about it every day. What's the use of thinking? Have you taken action? Has it been written down? What would the average person do in this situation? Think about it for yourself, author! It made me feel really uncomfortable. Since you write about your feelings so seriously, you have to write it realistically. The plot of enlightenment written by the author is also very funny. I read Enlightenment twice and I still don't know what the use is. Writing novels is different from reality. When you write novels, when something happens, there must be corresponding things to reflect it, such as the improvement of one's realm or the improvement of a certain skill. It's getting better and better in Lingtian Sect, but the plots written are getting more and more boring. I really don't know what the author is thinking. Are you going to never mention Mu Xi again? How to deal with this matter? Do we have to wait until the late stage of foundation building or the golden elixir to find it? I don't know how many years have passed by that time. Isn't the protagonist worried about accidents? For example, being forced to marry or something like that. The key is that this is illogical. Once a normal person settles down, he will definitely contact the heroine first to tell him that he is safe, and then the two of them will discuss what to do in the future. Now I'm still doing tasks and doing tasks all day long. I don't feel much about it. It doesn't look good.

After reading it, I skipped some of the fighting chapters of the Demon Slayer War. I liked the plot style all day long. It is not the invincible style. The system only gives the protagonist the ability to improve his talents. It is not the kind of mindless cultivation. In the early stage, the protagonist will be suppressed if he has poor qualifications and needs the help of a Taoist companion. His talent and cultivation have improved step by step, and he has now become the leader of a state. On the long road to immortality, there are four beautiful Taoist companions who will never leave him. The male protagonist has also been tempted by many other female cultivators, but in the end, he sticks to his heart. The four Taoist companions have also made the protagonist invincible in the future.

After reading the first and second volumes, I am not very interested in the third volume. Personally, I like to watch daily life, slaps in the face, comedy, and plots about hard work and improvement. I don't like watching fights. On the first and second coupons, the dragon lurks in the abyss, and the dragon soars in the wild. All pretty good. Life is so tiring, just read some cool articles to relax. The protagonist is a person with a bottom line, and the heroine is very well portrayed. However, there is one thing. Ming Mingqiu Luhua said before that she would respect the heroine as her real wife and become the sword in her hand. But in the end, because the heroine was jealous and took over the male protagonist, she turned her sword on her. I can understand it, but I just feel that Qiu Luhua doesn't mean what she says. But I still really like these two heroines.

What a great book. I rarely leave reviews. There is a saying that the writing is very well written and the characters are very vivid. I have read a lot of novels. This novel is as eye-catching as other online novels. I don't understand why there are so few readers. It really shouldn't be. I almost missed it at first because there were so few readers.

From my personal point of view, I think it's very good-looking. Well, I really like reading this type of writing. The writing style is also quite good. I don't know why the rating is so low. There are very few bad points. Basically, there are only a few places where the writing is a bit embarrassing [smile] [smirk]

It's very beautiful, the writing and plot settings are great. Seriously speaking, this is a fun book, but it is not the kind of book that is always fun. After rising, the protagonist will still have regrets because he cannot achieve something, which is a pity. The protagonist's cheating threshold is very high, so in order to become stronger, the protagonist is destined to suffer greater setbacks than other brainless works. But the author writes well and the setbacks seem very reasonable. The only pity is that this book does not have a good ending. What a pity. What a pity.

It is a very real picture of cultivating immortals, the miserable life of low-level monks, and the real scene where only strength is respected. The story of the protagonist and heroine is also very heart-wrenching, and the development process is even more terrible than other invincible novels. Although it cannot give the feeling of invincibility, the important thing is that the author carefully wrote out the true feelings of cultivating immortals in his heart! For this reason, I am also willing to give a five-star rating.