Forced to Become the Immortal Realm's Succubus, I Refuse to Lie Flat

Really pretty! It's a bit funny though! It's really interesting. I hope there will be more in the new book! Come on! 😏 I feel like the harem will be opened, I hope I can take them all 🤭 🤭 🤭

The daily writing is very good. It describes the charm and various events and posts with many heroines. I originally wanted to give it 5 stars. It is actually good to write sweet articles that focus on daily life and happiness. However, I have already deleted this book and came back to read it again. The reason is that the plot of Rakshasa Kingdom from Chapter 40 to Chapter 60 is really poisonous and boring. The protagonist has a contradictory personality. These 20 chapters are full of female porn and pornography. Skipping this part will not affect the subsequent plot at all. I added it back later when I was wandering around in the bookstore, and it's good to return to daily posting later.

The article is not long, so I'm only halfway through it. First of all, I want to affirm the author's writing skills. His choice of words and sentences are definitely not inferior among his peers. The writing style is really good. It's the kind that won't make you disgusted by the words alone. It's even very praiseworthy. I didn't see a single typo! This alone gives me five stars. It was very interesting from the beginning. It rarely entertained me several times and gave me the motivation to read it in one breath. Compared with the writing, the plot arrangement is above average for the succubus theme. In my opinion, the character creation is not likable enough. In other words, when watching it, I would like the protagonist to do a better job, which seems a bit useless. However, this kind of thing is a matter of opinion. If there is too much discussion, I often don't know what to say and don't mention it. But the flaws don't outweigh the good points. It's definitely worth a read during a book shortage, and it deserves a good review! Alas, I later felt that it was a bit too wordy, with a lot of flowery words and no substantial progress after a long time. I listened to the book for a long time and I didn't know what I was listening to. The more I write about the main character, the less solid it becomes. Now I feel that I really have no interest in continuing to read it, but the author is not willing to give it four stars.

The previous book was really amazing, but it was a pity that it was not timely and was eliminated by the era when traffic is king! I hope to continue the style of the previous book. Don't be too deliberate and follow the wind. Ups and downs are the norm. It should get to the point early, or have a clear main line.

The author is very good at writing emotional dramas, and the characters are established within a few sentences and a few common scenes. However, I hope that the characters will not change too quickly because of too many heroines, and the characters will be too complicated due to too many harems.

It's so outrageous, both the protagonist and the people inside, stop at Chapter 7

I am a mortal who has a biography of cultivating immortality 🤦

The writing is very good in many places, and the foreshadowing is well laid out. It's also quite touching. It's neither a stud nor a prisoner. I don't know why the score is so low.

This is the best harem novel I have ever read

The current stage is 8 points, which is overall much better than the previous book. There aren't that many messy sentiments about saints, and the plot isn't that cliche, but I feel like the story is moving too fast [Chigua]