S13: From Beggar Streamer to Grand Slam Champion

The LOL competition is well written and detailed. The protagonist's personality is also good. (The author's last LOL love line was so poisonous that I gave up the book. I hope I will write less in this one, even if I write it a few more times and take it with me. The author should think more about the love line and the character's perspective, and don't just substitute your own ideas. Without the icing on the cake, it is easy to become a rat.) Author, please update. ☺️☺️☺️Write less emotional lines🙃If you can't, write more brotherly love. ☺️☺️☺️Please. It's really better not to write if you write poorly [cry][cry][cry] No, the last star still has to be awarded in batches. Just now I took another look at the emotional lines in the previous book that looked like shit. Wow. Please write more about brotherly love. Don't write emotional lines! ! ! It's good if you write a few dialogues between the protagonist's fans that the protagonist doesn't know! ! ! It's also good to write about protective fans that the protagonist doesn't know about! ! ! Don't write love scenes! ! ! Don't believe you! ! ! ! How can I put together a long review for the author to read? ! ! ! Don't really write a love line. You can just set the stage for it when it's almost finished. You can start a side story and write it however you want! ! ! ! I can't stand it anymore! ! ! What a piece of shit. But the writing within the game is okay. [Smile]

Although there are only a few chapters now, I have the protection of the old book. I will give the new book a five-star rating first. [Learned] I'm not worried at all about the game, it's a lot of good-looking stuff, but in other aspects I think you should think it through before writing it. Don't let the confusing things like Zhang Jun Baixuan's apprentice appear in the previous book. Either don't write it, or write it in full. I'm not afraid of you making friends, accepting apprentices, and falling in love. At least you can write the whole plot in a comprehensive and reasonable way. ☕ After reading it, the writing is still so wonderful, the vividness of the competition, and the detailed analysis are the best. However, other scenes outside of the competition are still so unclear that they are not much better than the previous book. But after all, this is an e-sports article, so it's enough to write about the competition well. It's the same as a one-stop gift collection. I look forward to the next book. [Learned]

The old author guarantees the quality. I have finished the last book and it is time to continue. Come on, come on. Finally, I wish the child a speedy recovery

It's good to read, but Liang Chen's book has whetted my appetite. After reading other e-sports articles, I always feel that everything is a bit inferior, and there is a shortage of books. Fortunately, you have started a new article again [Send heart] But you didn't give any warning when you started a new article. If I hadn't clicked on the author's homepage one day on a whim, I wouldn't have found any new articles. [Learned]

The content is wonderful. The author has been a king for 10 seasons. The last book has already made him a god.

Familiar wild king, familiar taste, familiar five stars

Review first and then read, it won't be a bad idea if you have some background information

Okay, I have an old book to guarantee that the quality of this book will be better than the last one [angry]

A very nice e-sports article

Not bad, good, highly recommended