After Failing His Tribulation, the Immortal Venerable Came to the Modern World to Give Up

A particularly good-looking article. I think the offensive and defensive characters are relatively distinct, the emotional line is complete, and the writing is good. A non-traditional article about ancient times and the present. Like some of the ancient times and the present that I have read, they are probably the ones who traveled to the modern era and then started to show off crazily and met his boss boyfriend. I think the degree of pretentiousness in this article cannot be said to be very small, but it looks very comfortable and does not cause that kind of discomfort (? Feeling). What I especially want to praise is that he finally did not develop into a boss boss and his little wife. I personally think that he is a double power in a certain sense (a little strange is just a personal opinion). In fact, I feel that both Gong and Shou are the kind of slimy but arrogant puppies, but the two feelings are different. Gong is a bit more sunny and a cheerful puppy ( I think the plot is relatively coherent. Although the past background is explained, it doesn't make people feel confused and incomprehensible, and his emotional line may be a long and flowing one (? Because some plots are a little forgotten, which may not be right, but they are not the kind of sudden and inexplicable mutual liking. I feel that the setting of Gong can hear Shou's voice is particularly good. On the one hand, it facilitates the advancement of the plot, and on the other hand, it creates the character image, which is perfect. I can only tell the difference between readable and unreadable writing. I can't comment on whether it is good or very good. I think the writing is relatively good in this article. At least it can be read. One of the things that can be reflected in it is that I don't think it portrays Shou as that kind of spoiled wife. I still want to praise it because I was scared to see the two male protagonists in "Sex Transformation". Overall, I think it is better than many 9-rated Tomato books and is a book worth reading.

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A mind-reading, sultry, love-minded, top-notch actor with lots of inner drama Who knew that this setting was tailor-made for me! ! ! I feel so good watching it hehehe Bullying you is finally going to be popular! ! ! After waiting for a long time, I finally waited until today~ After waiting for a long time, my dream finally came true~ I am also one of the first fans to be bullied (?) Don't forget us when the time comes to bully you [I'm about to cry]

I like Xiao Zhuo so much, he is cute and straight-forward, he talks very funny, he is also a love brain, and his character is very lovable. I like Zaizai, he is well-behaved and has the same personality as his father. Lu Wu was really miserable, and his love for Xiao Zhuo was miserable. He had paid so much for Xiao Zhuo, but he could not be with Xiao Zhuo until his death. Although Lu Chenjun is the reincarnation of Lu Wu, I think he is more like a doppelganger and his words are very humorous, but I can't criticize him and Xiao Zhuo CP. From the beginning to participating in the love variety show, every time an artist had a conflict with Xiao Zhuo, he would either fight or act as a peacemaker. There were female artists who coveted him. They behaved very gentlemanly every time, and Xiao Zhuo had to take action. Can you reject those women as a gentleman? That time in the mountains, Xiao Zhuo was obviously motion sick and sick. I went to the village to rest, and a female artist arranged for Xiao Zhuo, but he changed the topic without explaining. The problem is that everyone knew that they knew each other and were friends who could live in the same room. In the end, he went with this artist and got lost. I wanted to abandon the article at that time. I read the comments and said that there were Zaizai in the back and continued reading, and Xiao Zhuo bought him a lot of peripherals and dolls. He only customized the same style as Xiao Zhuo when it was almost finished. The strangest thing is that all the people who provoke Xiao Zhuo are the kind of people who are willing to fend for themselves. Lu Chenjun is obviously a top class person with a good background, but he doesn't vent his anger on Xiao Zhuo's behalf. Although you are not allowed to bully others with your power, even if in reality, your wife is bullied and you are powerful, the other party is not either. It's a good thing. It's strange that you didn't think about revenge. Moreover, the Luo family almost killed Lu Lu. Luo Feng was obviously involved in that incident. He also borrowed other people's luck and escaped several disasters. For such a person, the author finally assigned him a CP, and he was also the protagonist's agent. He really couldn't complain. The 5-point praise for the book is for Xiaozhuo. Others can only be said that maybe everyone's understanding is different, but after reading it, it is indeed the feeling I wrote. If you have different opinions, please don't leave any comments here. I don't read replies.

The story is pretty good and the subject matter is interesting. It's better to watch it without thinking. Some parts of the plot that should be carefully written are omitted, and it feels not very satisfactory. I hope it can be explained clearly from beginning to end. There is a lot of plot content to delve into, thank you. It's hard to remember anything after reading it. The plot is too rushed. I hope the author's next book will be more exciting and complete. [Love]

Ahhhh, so sweet~ The writing is smooth, the writing style is vivid and vivid, and the plot is full of settings. Zhuo Qinghua's name is so cute, and he is also cute and obedient. Lu Chenjun was a little senseless at first, but it gradually improved. The two of them were sweet and sweet, and they also found the cute little boy Lu Yunze, a family of three mythical beasts, and the house was well established [Like] The deputy CP is also sweet and sweet, not abusive 🙂‍↔️, don't worry and watch it👍

There is really no need for Luo Wei and Luo Feng later. In any case, it is a fact that the Taoist Association hurt the protagonist. Others are very good, especially the cute Xiao Zhuo. It's just that Lu feels like he's incompetent on some things...

Although I haven't finished it yet, I have read Chapter 92. The writing is smooth and there are not many typos. Xiaozhuo is also very cute. Lu is very in love. This article has been completed. Let's see if there are any mistakes to fill in. It is really interesting. Don't look at the current rating of more than 8 points. It's just that there are fewer people commenting. It's not a loss after reading it. I have very strict reading standards. Trust me, I'm right.

What a joke! Absolutely amazing! This book is simply amazing! How can I put it, the characters all have a sense of being alive, and it feels like each character gets along with each other like a friend around them. It is a relaxed and sweet story, like the writing style before the epidemic, revealing a positive, relaxed and happy atmosphere. No one feels superior to anyone, even the male protagonist has his fans. When the two protagonists are together, some people respect and bless them, while others break their guard and curse. Not like in ordinary novels: Ah, it matches so well! The number of fans continues to increase. There are no absolute villains who are all out for their own interests. The hero's parents never really wanted them to be together, and the same goes for the ending. Later, the hero's baby from their previous life came out and told them to go home. They would still feel bad when they opened the door and saw the protagonist suffering.

It's nice to read, Xiao Zhuo is cute, but it's not as soft as some books (which is a good point!). Because it's so beautiful, I realized that I forgot to rate it. Why is this book rated so low? It's obviously so beautiful [Blow kiss]