Everyday Life With My Emotionless Girlfriend

There is nothing bad about this new book so far. The mission development and plot are pretty good. There is no awkward feeling. The interaction between the male and female protagonists is also very good. I hope to keep up the good work and not stop updating. [Blow kiss]

The writing is very good, the writing style is very delicate, and the narration is not laggy. There are some small flaws, but they do not affect reading. For those who read it, it is already 100 chapters. It should not be. It is obviously a good article, but the popularity is not as popular as some bad articles. Author, hold on, the main thing is that I will feel uncomfortable if the good book is gone.

It has a lot of interactions and is super sweet. The female protagonist is not dependent on the male protagonist. It is good so far. Among the current single female protagonists, I personally think it is one of the best. (The heroine is super cute) Hehehehehe [Adoration]

How do you say it? The plot theme and world concept are quite good, not the same thing every time, I like it more. I personally feel that this one should be rated around 9.4. But the writing is a bit lacking, the emotional expression is stiff, and some transitions are not smooth enough. There are also some plots that are quite redundant, there are too many unnecessary daily stories, and the readers still feel a little boring. Some of them can be deleted, and the essence can be taken away from the dross, right? In addition, the reference of some words and actions is not clear, that is, it is unclear who said it and who did it. Generally speaking, authors need to improve their writing skills, otherwise they won't be able to get high scores. For example, I could get around 9.4 Before, but now it's been a few months and I still haven't gotten to 8. Keep up the good work! ! !

Come on, author, I think this book is quite good, but not very popular. The male protagonist is quite funny, and the female protagonist has a more lovable personality and is naturally dull. I will polish the plot carefully in the later stages. I should burn it when I should burn it, and I should be able to let it go a little bit.

Good book. Very interesting. I recommend giving it a try. The first thing that bears the brunt is the description of the battle. Whether it is the writing style, the description, or the exciting rhythm, the various battle scenes are written very beautifully. In addition, the settings of the witches and spirits are particularly perfect, and the battle is indeed exciting. And the emotional line is particularly great. There are many emotional scenes between the male and female protagonists who support each other and they are very sweet. I said that the three girlfriends with gray hair are right, do you understand? By the way, the duality of the male protagonist is also very good. If you don't write about overturning, you will win. It has a beginning and an end, and there are plenty of daily scenes. It's just that I always like to secretly hide knives and foreshadowing in daily life, which is a bit scary, but luckily it's he. Highly recommended to watch

It's very beautiful, it has a faint dragon smell [laughing evilly] but it's sweet enough [like] and it also has a lot of ideas and writing style. It's also quite mature, unlike some Tomato books where the author's literary quality is not good at first glance. This book deserves a higher rating Moreover, the author's composition is complex and there are jokes, I like it even more now [laughs evilly]

This book is really good. It's the only book that made me feel lost after reading the last anime. The fight and love scenes between the male and female protagonists are well distributed. There are many descriptions of battle scenes. It's worth reading📖[Send my heart][Send my heart][Send my heart]

Very good book, made my brain spin, Love from China

The plot is detailed and progressive, and the emotional lines are perfect. Overall, there is no fault. If I have to nitpick, the plot of the male protagonist's atonement is a bit stiff. If there were less "atonement" and more psychological description of the male protagonist, I personally feel that it would be much better. There are some typos and omissions, but it's not a big problem. It's a bit high and low, but it's still highly recommended.