The Pei Family's Concubine-Born Son
裴家庶子
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 500k Words
- Genre
- Two Male Leads
- Updated
- 2y ago
- English
- Request a translation
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Sweet M/M Stories
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Any good boys' love novels with a happy ending and a bit of angst?
Any Recommendations for Finished Stories with Two Male Leads?
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As a seasoned bookworm, I found this one quite good. The plot didn't have any major logical flaws, and the writing style was decent. However, the author seems to struggle with scene transitions. Many transitions were abrupt, jumping directly to the next scene without any description.
It's actually really good. The writing is smooth, without any messy, melodramatic plots, and the main characters are all intelligent. Although there are some twists and turns in their backgrounds, I personally think it will have a happy ending... Pei Yulang has pride, and his willingness to submit to Prince Xuan shows genuine affection; the two of them do have feelings for each other...
Having read half of it, here's my review: The writing is already quite good, the narration is clear, and the plot is relatively tight. Areas for improvement include the development of the romance. While the Ninth Prince's attraction to Xiao Pei could be purely lustful, it shouldn't be limited to that. You need to explain how he fell in love with Xiao Pei; otherwise, he comes across as a scoundrel.
It's so incredibly good!! The writing is fantastic, and the plot is amazing! I'm already imagining what Jinjin will look like with white hair later on 🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰
I can't sleep, so I'm leaving a comment for you ◕ฺ‿◕ฺ✿ฺ)
I expect it to get a bit angsty later on, but there's plenty of smut early on, it's delicious! I love finding smut in tomatoes!
It looks amazing, but I wonder if Pei Jiu is a time traveler.
It's good, witty and humorous, with vivid character portrayals, humorous language, detail, dialogue, and descriptions. Pretty good, worth getting into. 🤣🤣
Good good good good good good good The plot is quite good, but the transitions between scenes are sometimes abrupt and lack coherence.
The plot was fast-paced and engaging! Occasionally, the abrupt scene transitions took some getting used to 😂 It was a bit of a shame that the ending didn't address the memory recovery. The unexpected addition of a childbirth scene in the epilogue was quite surprising! Overall, a satisfying ending made for a pleasant read.