One Piece: Afraid the World Isn’t Violent Enough!

I really like this book. The plot line so far is pretty good and there are no major bugs. It's rare to write a good story about Pirates and Lingling. She is arrogant but not brainless, cunning and ruthless, willful but can also calculate the gains and losses coldly and rationally. This is the charming image of a top evil woman who can become the Yonko in my mind, rather than a crazy and obese old woman who follows the trend. The image positioning of the male protagonist is also very good. Let's put it this way, if Oltorun was the little butter male protagonist of R18, I would play through the entire game because of my greed for his beautiful [beep—] and [beep—] and [beep—]. Well, that's pretty much what it means. However, I read a review and said that the author's pirate novels will all turn into harem novels. I don't know what this one will be like. I hope the emotional line won't be too toxic, please.

It's good to read, but I feel a little uncomfortable with Lu Jiu. I hope it's not the heroine. Apart from that, this book is indeed a rare good book in One Piece. The author is great, come on! [Love][Love][Love][Laugh]

Come on, old Z. I chased you from next door. I really feel that the author is the number one among Pirates fans!

Overall, it's very good. The only bad thing is Lu Jiu. I really can't stand it. I have to jump every time I see it [rolls eyes]

The level is much higher than the average level of Tomato fan fiction. It is a high-quality text. There is no deliberately poisonous point. The logic of events is also somewhat original. The writing is smooth and worth spending time to read.

I got it from Fei Lu Chai. Every one of Boss's movies is very good.

From the perspective of someone who has never watched One Piece, this is a great book! It slowly connects the characters of the entire world to the protagonist. The characters are perfectly created and the characters are distinct throughout the whole ending. People who have never been exposed to this comic series can easily recognize each character, and have a strong sense of immersion, making people motivated to follow it. I didn't see any messy problems like ghostwriting, and the plot was described very wonderfully and coherently. Final summary: This is a "One Piece Masterpiece"!

The writing is quite good. I don't understand why in the world of One Piece, you have to be a pirate. Isn't it good to help the navy unlock the shackles and finally change the world?

Now that I've finally finished reading it, let me share my feelings. The first point is that among all the pirate novels I have read, it is the only one that I have finished reading. This is worthy of praise. After all, without delaying him, without water, it would be over directly. It must be praised. The second point is about the protagonist's growth experience and the plot of the characters around him. The whole content is relatively reasonable. I can only say that it is very reasonable and very good. Regarding the third point about layout, I think the overall idea is very clear. Go from nowhere—join the navy—become a general—become king of the world. Every step is connected and not too abrupt. Point 4 is about emotions. I think Lujiu is a better entry point. Then there is the aunt who has to say that she was really beautiful when she was young. I think the aunt's psychology can be described in more detail. This will strengthen the bond of family ties. Then the last scene, Lord Im, I think this setting is acceptable. The above are some of my feelings after reading this book. It is recommended that everyone take a look. You can try it out.

Ben's story is actually very simple, just like the title of the book says, in the name of loyalty. There is a sentence that is very well written (loyalty is not absolute, absolutely not loyal). The development is obscene in the early stage, the secret in the middle stage, and the climax in the later stage is the yellow robe. [Learned] [Learned] Although we can guess the general plot, this is the most praiseworthy point. We all know that the protagonist will definitely brave the wind and waves all the way, but the difficulty lies in the characterization of the details and the grasp of the rhythm. The author definitely has some writing skills! But it is a pity that there is not enough space to depict emotions, whether it is Taotu, Lujiu or even Hancock, who has only appeared a few times. Overall, the writing is pretty good.