One Piece: In the Whitebeard Pirates, No Need to Worry, Pops

Overall, it's good and very interesting. It's not all invincible right from the start. It also has some of the author's own ideas, which can be adapted. The only shortcoming is that there are too many people who join the White Group later in the book, such as Barrett and Hawkeye. Personally, I don't think they would recognize Whitebeard as their father due to their characters in the original novel. But overall it's still very good👍! Very humorous and has very few typos.

A cute little old man Original song "The Wind Rises" Stop and go along the way Follow the traces of drifting on the sea The moment before becoming a pirate A little hesitant I can't help but laugh at this lifelong wish family around Look at your smiling face Still so warm Remembered my partner The once immortal green flame Two Swords in Flowers Listen to all things Kozuki Oden There is also Sachi who hides diamonds and fire fists Now we go to the battlefield together One hundred thousand soldiers Fist crushes magma and cuts golden light with knife The iron fist and frost are just like the palms of Buddha descending from heaven I once smashed the void with my fist and was named the strongest Tsunami shock is unparalleled and domineering Cong Yun is in hand, killing all the monsters and asking who dares to take the role? Today's old and sick remnant of the era I just want to protect my son The new era has no cabin for me Walking against the light, suffering from sword sores and gunshot wounds Since I was born in this endless ocean It is bound to become famous all over the world. Looking back on my original dream of becoming the Four Emperors Maybe what you're looking forward to is just having your family by your side Try it again Foolish son stabs his father Forgive him too The war rages on with Malinfando Seven warriors and three generals The Iron Fist Golden Buddha is waiting for you to come I am also willing to go through fire and water to face swords and guns. Even if the lava penetrates the chest Darkness plummets Silk Blood Counterattack Kills the Evil Son Mo Kuang Go back ten years and I will kill myself with a knife I laugh to myself and ask you, Rat-headed Deer Even though he is an old man, he is not afraid of monsters Finally sighing, the journey is long, a dream of yellow beams I have also had the palm of my hand for half my life Don't kill a pair of black-handed iron fists Before dying, I was a little confused The evening breeze blows up the white frost in my beard Heal the sores left by the sea My life has darkness and light, I only hate the flames The dusk covers my sharp eyes Suddenly recalling the king of those days Let's get to know each other and help some more I still marvel at his great ambition He also admitted what he said back then No need to struggle whether the treasure is real or fake, it's not a joke I will finally put down the glory of my life Together with the home I value most Just let him go with your grudges and grudges Is my father still qualified?

Relatively gentle, making up for the regret Give the Thunder Fruit to that peach, [cover your face] [cover your face] [cover your face] just throw it away

It's a very nice book, not the kind of cool one that is invincible at the beginning. The image of Whitebeard is also well portrayed. It can be seen that he is really serious about writing this book. I like it very much [Blow Kiss]

Not bad, good-looking, small growth stories are more interesting than big events

It's so beautiful. I rarely give 5 stars. Really rare. Most of them give 2 stars. As long as you write this book well and don't have a bad ending or sudden old system, it is definitely a good book. I hope the author will keep up the good work. Come on.

It may be a bit toxic in the early stage, especially Barrett. After Hawkeye is defeated, he may join the white team, but Barrett feels a bit broken, but in the later period, especially after arriving in Wano Country, I feel that the writing is much better.

It's pretty good, but the updates are a bit unsatisfactory. I watched it [face covering]

Overall, it's very interesting. I have a question. Who did you copy from whose book? I also saw this book in another software, but I didn't read it. The cover and title are exactly the same.

The writing is pretty good, so I can't give a professional review, but compared to other pirate fan fiction, there are very few novels that I can patiently read here.