He Came from the Forbidden Zone, Waving His Sleeve to Write of Eternal Life

Really good fairy grass, I haven't seen such a beautiful fantasy in a long time, the last one was still bad, author, please come on!

To be honest, I have found this book to be very good so far. The plot and characterization are all very good, but I don't know why the rating is so low. I also read the reviews of the author's two previous books and it was beyond my expectation. Many people said it was not well written. But here I really hope that the author can write this book better, and then I saw the author said that in the future he will be a knife apprentice, I really want to say, can I not have a knife apprentice? Really, I beg the author not to kill my little apprentice, she is really having a bad life, I really hope the author can give her a good ending [crying] I decisively abandoned the book, and the poisonous spots began to appear.

Finally, unlike other immortality stories, after living for so long, my thoughts are still as childish as those of a high school student. This is how it should be. The longer you live, the more indifferent you become.

Come, the author read with me, and I solemnly swear: starting from today, I will never update. I will not watch dramas, travel, or get sick. I will play no games, no hydrology. Strict self-discipline, cherishing time like gold, perseverance, hard work, advocating first-class, striving for brilliance, taking pleasure in coding, being tempered into steel, and worthy of readers, worthy of youth, and worthy of the future. As an author, I solemnly swear: I firmly believe that I am an excellent author. Coding is my bounden duty. I have unlimited potential and am not afraid of hardship! I can code diligently. I am a keyboard in the dark and a guard on the Great Wall of Internet. I voluntarily dedicate my life to coding every day. This is true every night.

This is true immortality. Rather than the boring extra points

The writing is very good. I read through the comments, and they all mentioned toxic points. The character is broken. Let's talk about the part about the voice transmission technique for the apprentice. How many eras have the protagonist met for? So what if this era is ruined for his apprentice? There is also the art of meeting and sending the emperor. No one will think that these are very important to the protagonist. Everyone wants to bring in the character of the protagonist. An immortal who has lived for an unknown amount of time. Basically, if you look carefully at these questions, there are traces to follow. It's just that some people have read too many cool articles and are unwilling to use their brains to see the logic. Don't be stubborn with me. Those who are stubborn can go back and read your mindless cool articles.

I have read many longevity books, and this one is the best. There is also a book called "Eternal Life in the World of Martial Arts" written by a crazy demon that is also very good. This book really has the feeling of an immortal

When I read about Chapter 4 of Volume 2, I felt that it was a good one among longevity novels. Now that I have read it, I feel good. I hope that the author will continue to work hard and not collapse the plot in the later period (Personal humble opinion: I feel that the plot is a bit high, I hope it can come back round)

The potential for a masterpiece, except for the minor flaws in the language, is very good. The plot is innovative and fascinating. At the end of the day, I hope there will be a female protagonist [smile][smile][smile][smile]

Now that I have read the second volume, I feel that the writing is good. Many of the places have good intentions. The only thing is that millions of residual thoughts are gone. I feel really sad. Maybe there are too few people who treat each other sincerely. Millions of residual thoughts have passed away for you. I am really moved by the affection in it. , Both have good definitions of justice. Jiutian is for immortality, and the protagonist is for liberation from what is right and wrong. There is indeed a lot of evil in the world and one does not know its evil. Most of them are in the world of mortals, so they just follow the waves. I think the companionship of the little apprentice is very cute, but the protagonist has probably seen it too many times, and looks at everyone. I was born as a fool and have become numb over the years. In fact, I think the young apprentice is relatively lucky. When I have seen the protagonist have feelings, the other four million immortal emperors are even worse. They will never melt after a lifetime, so I feel that the emotional writing is still very good. If you can feel something after reading this book, it is a good book for me, hahaha.