A Reborn Man? I’ll Gladly Take Your Fortunes!

It's a very nice novel, but it's too slow. Author, I traveled back from five hundred years later. The future reality will slowly merge with your novel, and people from other worlds will invade the earth. In order to win, they catch you before you can write the ending, after which the true catastrophe for humanity begins. Five hundred years ago, the genius Mr. Albajirk invented the time machine, and Hajigao, the top executive of the People's Federation, ordered me to go back to the time before everything happened to find you. In order to fight back against the aliens, we need to get all the weaknesses of the aliens from your novel immediately. Please update 500 chapters a day immediately. For the survival of mankind, you must update more! No, they're going to find me! You must update more, your information will make mankind great again!

Writing style: Singularity is normal and is on the upper side, Tomato is on the middle side, no trace of AI usage is detected, handwriting is encouraged ➕0.5⭐️ Plot: The protagonist's IQ has reached the upper limit of this world - the author's own IQ. The plot is reasonable and the battle of wits is extremely exciting. It's almost catching up with the previous seasons of Araki's Jojo. I'm looking forward to the subsequent updates➕4⭐️ Update speed: I don't know, I'll check it out later, first ➕0.5⭐️

I felt pretty good after reading it in one go. The story is a good one. I personally like the author's description of the indomitable spirit of Chinese civilization. I like it very much. After seeing the counter-killer reborn, I always felt that something was missing. I felt that the pretense was not perfect and smooth enough. I personally suggest that you add a paragraph. Tianyuan's conversation with 749's senior management guessed the protagonist's ability. It is very likely that the reborn was sent back by the future protagonist to convey some kind of information to him. Of course, the author has given some hints, but I think it's just a little bit off. I hope you will continue to work hard and write better and better. Please update more and more. Thank you.

The writing is really good. The writing style, depth of thought, and layout are all rare in Persimmon. Is it just that the updates are too slow? 🤦 By the way, can you tell me if it's an order or more? I hope you don't make people sick by stock trading.

👍 The ideological level of this book is definitely higher compared to books of the same level. The plot is smooth and there are no obvious or uncomfortable blocking points or too obvious plot points. As for some people saying that hiding private goods and necessary foreshadowing of the plot is a novel method. It's better than those brainless female pornographic articles. Anyway, I highly recommend this book. Really, in today's novel circle, except for those famous novels or books with some reputation, it is difficult to find such books with both culture and height. 🤭

I have one thing to say, it's really good. The plot is quite reasonable, the setting is interesting, the plot has a sense of déjà vu but is well handled. The world view is almost unfolded in the front, and the Death of the Reborn is finished. The following should be the Kunlun Worlds chapter. It's hard to miss the small climax in the Academy. The main rhythm should be the story of the people rising up to resist when the whole world is built on the situation of unequal information. Overall, it's a good book with good ideas, ideas, and good reasoning (but I also dare to say it). It's a good book for Tomato, but the number of words is a bit short, but the quality is worth it. I would like to add that regarding the handling of the heroine, the life-saving grace and the more sincere heart are the reasons why the protagonist chooses her (the protagonist is face-blind (funny), but the expression is a bit abrupt, and the emotional description is not bad, Tomato is not bad 🤭 12.13 I would like to add that the content is novel enough, but the combat power is at risk of collapsing (it may become more powerful in the future), there are too many settings, and the protagonist seems to be using Tai Chi to understand the world and reinvent the world (according to the trend of the setting, everything in the world is available, the four seasons, the four phenomena, the five elements... There are too many, too easy to be criticized), and it is like an upgraded version of his telepathic magic, there are too many failures (this is still in the early stage, it is easy to forget the skills) I didn't see anything happening unexpectedly, or masters fighting each other. There was no shock similar to "little friend, what are you expecting?". It felt like a normal flow of spiritual energy reviving and invading all realms, with a little bit of the author's philosophy and historical understanding added. (It's also possible that the update was too slow and I didn't see it 🙂) 12.16 Carrots and vegetables have their own favorites, mostly theories, and others are too rare. It is two extremes like the death of a time traveler. I can't stand watching this kind of thing. I'll see you again [thoughts]

It's very interesting to read, and I almost read it in one sitting. It's not just a pleasant read, it's emotionally arousing, and it made me think about the author's worldview many times outside of the text. The setting is interesting and worth watching carefully. I feel like a masterpiece will appear in every era. The heroes of the world are like the crucian carp crossing the river. The emergence of this book is like the golden crucian carp swimming upstream, looking forward to crossing the dragon gate.

I like dusk very much, the beauty of dusk, and the meaning of dusk. At dusk, everything in the world seems to be covered with the afterglow of the setting sun. To be honest, I always feel an indescribable feeling at this time. I feel that the scenery is beautiful at this time. I want to express something, just like the ancient poets, but I don't know where to start. I can only slowly appreciate this beautiful scenery. Dusk often represents finality, fading, and ending. But who knows that death is not the end, but dusk is also the beginning, when the moon rises, it represents the beginning of a night. It is also a time for people to deal with their sadness. During this time, people can release the suppressed emotions of the day, pour out their sorrows to the dark night, and finally bury these emotions in their hearts and try to make themselves happier tomorrow. Dusk also represents the end of a bad day and allows people to relax before the dark night comes. Then have a good sleep, maybe things will turn around tomorrow🌆 It looks great, but I don't know why the rating is so low. Give me more praise. This book feels really good

How should I put it? It's very good. The world view is huge and the description is also very good. The setting of the protagonist is also very good. It's perfect. But I still have to say that I am pessimistic about this novel because the world view is too big, the setting is too well written, and the character on the bamboo slips is too three-dimensional and sage-like. Therefore, it is almost impossible to write to the end of this novel. One is that the author is also a human being. The author can write about saints, but the author is not a saint, so he can write and imagine that he is not. So the more you write, the less likely he is to be. The second one is that the world view is very big, very big, and the larger the world will naturally be more fixed, and if you want to break through this fixedness, you will need foreshadowing, and this novel has a lot of foreshadowing, so you can understand the probability that these foreshadowings will come true in the end. But even with an ordinary imagination, this novel is already okay and very good.

This book can be called the best fairy grass in Tomato. It has a good idea. It creates a group of fire fighters who resist fate. The setting is okay. The emotional line is not demonic, but it is not outstanding. Not only is this novel not a love line, but it also has deep thoughts. It combines Eastern philosophy with the extraordinary. However, it is also the author's subjective idea and worth thinking about, but it does not mean that it is correct. This is a matter of opinion. All in all, it is a good book, but I feel that the combat power has been increased at this stage. There are only more than fifty chapters now. If you like it, you can add a bookshelf, click to update, and buy a free power generation with love