Horror Tales: Extraction from the Start, Tempering Fearsome Evil Peach Resilience

Great! I'm finding gold in poop; finally, I have something worth reading on again! [Learned something new] So far, there are still no problems, and I still want to keep reading. As for the pacing, I personally think it's fine. If the goal is to write hundreds or thousands of chapters, a slower pace in the early stages is normal.

The characters are fairly well-developed, not the stereotypical dim-witted type. The protagonist's special ability to extract cheat codes should be strengthened. The initial limitation on the number of attempts to complete the puzzles and the fact that the characters aren't completely stupid was quite good.

It's alright, but in some parts of the plot, the same idea keeps repeating itself, which makes it a bit drawn out.

I never expected that even with a cheat code, the protagonist couldn't win.

Actually, the protagonist's performance in the bone-stealing contract was somewhat disappointing. Having already obtained it, if he had simply checked it again, he wouldn't have been in such a passive position.

That's amazing! He can write 100,000 words for just one chapter about an ancient temple and he's still not finished, unlike me who's always having writer's block.

1. Searching for the Spirit Fruit 2. Attribute System

There are some instances of character development faltering, and plot conflicts arise. The characters, after being sketched out over dozens of chapters, have become quite realistic, so sudden changes are noticeable. You can read it as a short story; overall, it's alright.

The writing is alright; the protagonist is both brave and resourceful. However, the opening scene takes way too long.

Personally, I think it's pretty good, better than some other authors. If some parts could be revised and some filler scenes removed, I think it would be a very good novel. The plot feels quite fresh, and the characters are portrayed quite vividly.