Horror Tales: Extraction from the Start, Tempering Fearsome Evil Peach Resilience

Very good, I am digging for gold in 💩, and finally I have one more person I want to read on [Learned] Looking at it now, there is still nothing wrong with it, and I still want to continue watching it. In terms of rhythm, I personally don't think there is anything wrong with it. If you decide to write hundreds of chapters, it is normal for the pace to slow down in the early stages.

The characters are quite fleshed out and not very silly. The extraction of the protagonist's golden finger should be strengthened. At the beginning, there was such a limit on the number of times to complete the puzzle mission, and the characters in the plot were not very stupid, which was good.

It's okay, but some parts keep repeating the same idea when dealing with the plot, which is a bit lagging.

I didn't expect that the main character could not be defeated even if he was in trouble.

In fact, during the bone-grabbing contract, the protagonist's performance was a bit unsatisfactory. He had already grabbed it, but if you open it again and take a look, you won't fall into passivity.

It's really awesome. I can write 100,000 words on an ancient temple chapter and I haven't finished it yet. It's not like me who always gets stuck on writing.

1. Searching for spiritual fruits 2. Attribute system

In some places, the character collapses and the plot conflicts. After dozens of chapters of sketching, the character has become very real. You can feel the sudden change. You can read it as a short story, but overall it's not bad.

The writing is okay, the protagonist is brave and resourceful, but even the beginning is too long.

Personally, I think it's okay. It's better than some authors. If I could rewrite some parts and delete some of the watery plots, I think it would be a very good novel. The plot feels relatively new, and the human nature is more vivid.