I Only Want the Immortal Maiden's Heart

The description of the female characters is really great, especially when the male and female protagonists give out sweets. Tomato has never seen this level. However, the male protagonist is too difficult to start, and he is always unlucky to encounter high-end games, so that he suffers all the way. In addition, the male protagonist's strength is not at the top soon after practicing, which gives people a feeling of abuse of the protagonist. Although he does not suffer, he cannot touch the female protagonists. Moreover, this worldview really has no time to spare. It is a little depressing and does not make people breathless. I hope I can write more sweet and greasy daily life in the future. I feel like this way of writing, let alone tomatoes, I guess there will be a lot of criticism from the mother-in-law. I hope the author can stick to it and finish it. As for the shortcomings, there are also comments below. First, the plot is incoherent, because it is a high-end game from the beginning, and various powerful figures are introduced all at once. There is no step-by-step development of the plot and the introduction of characters. It can be described as urgent. It is estimated that many light readers will be confused. The second is the problem of the male protagonist. It is normal to worry about exposure and fear of death. However, with the goddess Qian Tuxue's flawless love as a foil, the male protagonist is indeed a bit stingy and his image is somewhat unsustainable. It gives me a feeling that he is not worthy of Qian Tuxue. In short, the writing style of this book is very good, but the plot development and world view setting are really not interesting.

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The writing is the best among the novels I have read in Tomato so far. It can be seen that the author has a profound knowledge, the plot is coherent and not laggy, and the portrayal of each heroine is brilliant and has her own characteristics. The only shortcoming is that the development of the world view and background is a little rushed and messy. A large number of various forces and character nicknames are thrown out in a large space at once, which makes it difficult to read. The overall shortcomings are not concealed, it is very good, and it even makes me feel that the author has shrunk his talent at Tomato. Now I just hope that it will not be discontinued. Such an exquisite work deserves to be shown in its full glory.

This book shouldn't be on Tomato [laughing] It feels a bit like Liu Bei from the old days, and he still abuses women.

It's true [Chigua] [Chigua] describes women. The author is really fierce and does not hold back to describe the beauty of women. The sentences are beautiful throughout, but the shortcomings are that the content and atmosphere are a bit foggy and depressing. If you add humor and make it easy and enjoyable to read, this book will be a masterpiece. In the early stage, the protagonist was frequently frustrated, so let the protagonist face it with humor. The despair and depression conveyed at the beginning of the book, are you too anxious? There is no fear in the despair, and there is a free and easy humor in the pain [Chigua] [Chigua] [Chigua] makes it more comfortable to read

It is a first-class masterpiece, the characters are well created, and the process of an 'ant' struggling to survive is described in great detail. The description of the female characters is excellent. I even doubted how the author could write a normal beauty text so lustfully. The driving scenes were described in detail. No, man, I thought I had become a moderator. I lamented that the writing is really good. I doubted that the review was because it was difficult to read and I didn't read it carefully? The author ran away in the middle of the book, resulting in fragments of the plot, but there is an author who is not joking and his writing style is really good. It is suitable to calm down and read slowly, and slowly understand it. I feel that the city of villains is a bit delayed in the middle, but it does not hinder the overall impression. It is still a perfect work.

The author writes really well Pros: The portrayal of women is pretty good, the protagonist is also growing, the writing is very good, very good Disadvantages: First of all, this is not a cool article, and secondly, some chapters of the article seem to be intermittent. But it's free, and the requirements don't have to be too high. The most important thing is, has the author come to shore? Does he have a representative work?

The description of women is easy, and the main female characters are very strong; some people may think that strong women are toxic, but audiences like me who are keen on strong, independent women will enjoy it. Good luck, author. The logic is tight, and any hole dug can be filled in, and all the links are connected to justify it. The uncle's role was so wonderfully written🥰🥰

This book's score of 7 on Tomato is considered low. Many books with scores of 9 are not as good as this book. Of course, there are obvious problems with the plot and characters, but the author's writing style is smooth and vivid, which is something that many books in Tomato don't have. Just because the car drives well, it deserves a score of 8 or more.

Personally, I think it's quite good. Of course, you have to ignore some of the plots when reading this novel, such as the Forbidden Gate, and just jump to it (the same goes for the spread of fame at the beginning, but luckily Bai Jian's place came back) (of course, as long as you don't jump to read, you can understand it, and the parts that are not written are also The plot is not important), overall, it is very interesting, and the character of the protagonist is actually well shaped (don't criticize, because at the beginning of the goddess, Pig's Foot was afraid of death and lacked love, and he did not dare to admit it) (This novel describes the growth of Pig's Foot, which is quite acceptable)