The Demon Descends, and I Alone Savor the World’s Sins!

I feel it's better written than your last book, and it's already somewhat readable. I would like to give you some advice, that is, the protagonist can be more powerful. It's a bit long to foreshadow the protagonist's strength improvement. Then the emotional pull requires more contact. The basic framework can already be seen, which is very good. It's great to see your progress. By the way, when will the book "Buye Jiucang" be rewritten? The overall idea sounds good, don't give up. Come on, support you!

The subject matter of this article is relatively new, and it is recommended for newcomers to read. I also recommend people who like cool writing to come and read it. Anyway, I thought it was okay after watching it from beginning to end. Another point is that too few people read this book. Everyone is welcome to come and see

The author writes really well [shy][shy][shy]

I haven't read the previous one, but this one is really good. Generally, the spirit of books feels weak after reading this. I witnessed a young man's transformation from hatred to rebirth. Even though the world has changed, his original intention remains unchanged. I can feel that the protagonist's heart is gradually getting stronger. Looking forward to how the Bright Moon Bow will be laid out, and how to stir up trouble in the world of darkness. But inevitably, there are some problems with this book. The protagonist's design of the demon system and the demonized god are very carefully designed, but on the other hand, there are problems with the monsters. First of all, why is it called the ghost clan? Is it similar to the devil? There are elves in the ghost clan living in the dark world. Wouldn't it be awkward for dark elves to feel that way? The space system is controlled by a barrier, and there is no artifact to isolate it? Kong Emperor is stretching his hips a lot. The role of money has been eliminated, and tens of billions of assets are simply for fun? The treatment is top-notch, and the resources are either free or non-existent. It's really miserable for students, who don't get any material resources. If the sword holder hadn't had points, I really doubt that all those treasures would be of no use and would have to be confiscated. There are indeed minor issues upon closer inspection, but the overall plot is progressing step by step. For the time being, there is no such fake high-mindedness that is so mysterious and mysterious that one suddenly cannot understand it, and the vernacular readers are ecstatic.

The writing is pretty good, keep it up.

Why did you write Mu Qingyu to death?

I don't agree with Shuangwen. I can only say that it's a little bit more fun to grow up. I feel like I don't see where Shuangwen is. The only way for the protagonist to get revenge is to die together. It would be better to unlock the angel and the devil later.

No, why is it updated twice a day now? [Laughing awkwardly] I didn't make up for it before, but now it's even less. Brother, I'm really waiting online for you. I'm eager to watch it. [Awkward laugh][awkward laugh][awkward laugh][awkward laugh]

What can I say, not bad. The subject matter is okay, the setting and background are pretty good, but sometimes the plot is a bit cliche. Overall, it's good and quite enjoyable to watch, but not many people watch it. It's still good if you keep reading. I think it's understandable that the male protagonist was timid at first. Didn't you just die and go back to the past? So whose personality can change all of a sudden? Slow growth is inevitable. The character in the back is still a little different. There are some changes. Very recommended. Come on

Very novel, I like it very much, cool article!