The Forged Doomsday Journal

Strange clouds cover the sun and people's voices are timid, Five minutes of dusk and five minutes of night. Walking corpses and sick beasts are everywhere, Lament that thousands of lights are extinguished. . . You, taste carefully. . . [Eat melon] [eat melon] [eat melon]

The writing is very good and very immersive. Later I also understood that the G virus is the original strain of the G virus that was discovered in the Arctic after the second battle and then became sick. Later, people had antibodies. After that, Dr. Aita secretly studied the G virus and later spread the virus by the Dire Wolf Group. The virus spread is clearly written, including the subsequent character lines. The characters and plots are also connected. It is tightly written. It is a very good traditional zombie novel. I hope the ending will not be unfinished. I have read many zombie novels that are unfinished. Now the author has written more than one million words. I hope to write 6 million words. I can't stop. It's not a cool novel, nor a brainless novel. There is no Madonna, but there is also humanity. It's very good. I hope that several people in the protagonist group will not be embarrassed, including the female protagonist's small emotions, and the male protagonist will not be embarrassed either, even though the male protagonist is the author himself😎

The plot of the traditional zombie novel is also very good. The story in the campus made me feel like I was back in the dormitory. However, the foreshadowing is longer and the climax is later. However, the second volume starts to have some jumps, but this is also a major advantage of this article. The two volumes are independent stories, but they are on the same timeline. If you read them carefully, you will find that there are many connections between the two volumes. From the third volume, the timeline and the character stories begin to be unified. The story is quite good, but the writing style needs to be improved. Come on!

Give yourself an encouragement. This book has polished a lot of details. The beginning may be a bit boring, but this is all to pave the way for the subsequent plot. I still have many shortcomings, and I will continue to work hard. Anyway, thank you to everyone who supports me.

Real and immersive, you can see that the author tried his best to depict the picture in his imagination, and used a lot of foreshadowing to make everything seem so logical. From what I heard, some of the onomatopoeia is a bit strange, but it doesn't matter. Some foreshadowings are too long in the middle, and it is easy to forget what happened before. For example, the senior sister who jumped from the building was written in the beginning, and it was not until later that we found out that she was Shotgun's sister. And that number 0727, what is the connection between him and the protagonist. There are many side stories, but this makes it easy for people to not feel the existence of the main plot. Typical group orientation, numerous characters are difficult to digest, which is also in line with reality. The author must have a very detailed outline, otherwise it will be easy to forget the settings and experiences of the characters. But as a newcomer, it's already awesome to be able to work hard to write so many stories and characters. Good luck, author.

The writing is quite good, but there are some places that are not divided into paragraphs. It feels very tiring to read. There is no problem with the content. Come on, the author. I will try to write a million words with a few revisions. Let's do a million-word book test to take off.

I feel like I can still work on it!

It is indeed a memory, a memory article that belongs to the author alone.

The author is so sorry that I fell asleep listening to it last night, but your description of the scenes is very natural and the characters are very vivid. Hearing those nicknames makes me feel like I am back in school. The more I watch it, the more I feel like Train to Busan or "Alive"

The author has already written so much. It is really amazing. I would like to give praise and support to the author who works hard and perseveres!